Distortion

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Drama Angst Psychological Hogwarts Castle 6,558 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Albus Dumbledore Lily (Evans) Potter Severus Snape

Is Severus Snape really Dumbledore’s man? Dumbledore isn’t too sure, and with the future return of Voldemort, he needs to know he has complete control over his greatest weapon in the coming war. What lengths will the Headmaster go to in order to keep his newly appointed Potions master right where he wants him?

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0/10

TheCopperDragon2004

Hmm, i personally believe Dumbledore was a bit of a dick to Snape, though i usually see him portrayed as the kindly grandfather type. Yes refreshing to see the harder side of him, doing the things that you know he probably had to do "for the greater good."

10/10

Marty21

Wow I always knew Dumbldore was a twist man and it cost Severus his life. Sheesh Too bad Severus couldn't have killed two birds with stone and got ridden of both masters at once. *GRINS*

Response from Darkrivertempest (Author of Distortion)

I love the way you think! *grins back* Yeah, if only... but even Severus knew that if he'd come this far, he needed to finish the game. (sobs and sighs) I wonder if I'm the only one that didn't cry when Dumbledore died in HBP? Ah well.Thank you so very much for commenting, it's made my day! *hugs*

9/10

MuseAmusant

Damn... your Dumbledore is just as twisted in his way as Voldemort himself.*Shudders*

Response from Darkrivertempest (Author of Distortion)

*does a little SQUEE dance*I'm so glad someone realized that! Poor Severus was caught between two master manipulators and the price was his life. *sniffs* I've never liked Dumbledore from the beginning (that twinkling eye crap unnerves me) and my disquiet grew more as the books progressed. Thank you so much for reading and commenting HD! *hugs*

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