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Severus Big Bang Can't Take My Eyes Off You
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Can't Take My Eyes Off You

1: Chapter One: Watching

2: Chapter Two: Under Orders

3: Chapter Three: Planning the Mission

4: Chapter Four: Studying Together

5: Chapter Five: Another Know-it-all

6: Chapter Six: Investigations

7: Chapter Seven: Happy Birthday, Hermione

8: Chapter Eight: Halloween

9: Chapter Nine: A Private Moment

10: Chapter Ten: Tennis, Anyone?

11: Chapter Eleven: Giving Into Temptation

12: Chapter Twelve: Frustration Leads to Revelation

13: Chapter Thirteen: Spy Tactics

14: Chapter Fourteen: Explaining Magic

15: Chapter Fifteen: Back to Class

16: Chapter Sixteen: Return to Magic

17: Chapter Seventeen: Christmas Comes But Once a Year

18: Chapter Eighteen: New Year's Eve

19: Chapter Nineteen: Back to Hogwarts

20: Chapter Twenty: Avoiding the Issue

21: Chapter Twenty-one: Poetry and Roses

22: Chapter Twenty-two: Can't Take My Eyes Off You

23: Epilogue

Can't Take My Eyes Off You

sunny33

315 Reviews   |   315 Ratings, 0 Likes, 130 Favorites )

Humor Romance Action/Adventure Epilogue What Epilogue? Severus Big Bang 50,451 Words 23 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Severus and Hermione are both feeling disgruntled after the war is over. Especially with each other. Watch the fireworks when they are sent on a special mission together.

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Chapters (23)

Chapter 1: Chapter One: Watching

Chapter 2: Chapter Two: Under Orders

Chapter 3: Chapter Three: Planning the Mission

Chapter 4: Chapter Four: Studying Together

Chapter 5: Chapter Five: Another Know-it-all

Chapter 6: Chapter Six: Investigations

Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: Happy Birthday, Hermione

Chapter 8: Chapter Eight: Halloween

Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: A Private Moment

Chapter 10: Chapter Ten: Tennis, Anyone?

Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven: Giving Into Temptation

Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve: Frustration Leads to Revelation

Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen: Spy Tactics

Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen: Explaining Magic

Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen: Back to Class

Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen: Return to Magic

Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen: Christmas Comes But Once a Year

Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen: New Year's Eve

Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen: Back to Hogwarts

Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty: Avoiding the Issue

Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty-one: Poetry and Roses

Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-two: Can't Take My Eyes Off You

Chapter 23: Epilogue


About sunny33

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sunny33

Member Since 2008  |  129 Stories  |  Favorited by 689  |  8,383 Reviews Written  |  8,235 Review Responses

Hello all,  I am a 53 year old from NZ.  Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing.  Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)

Author Website
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Reviews for Can't Take My Eyes Off You

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10/10

pearl city princess

I love the way they take one step forward and two steps back, it keeps things interesting.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Yep.  Nothing's easy for those two!  :)

0/10

quaffswinegaily

Can't wait for him to declare himself.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

It will be memorable.  That's all I'll say. :)

10/10

rubyanjel

haha. severus with short hair but in a frock coat? looks like  cross between alan rickman's snape and metatron. haha. *imagines what she just said* ooooh! he looks so hot!!!!!!! i'm goona make a fan art out of it soon.:)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Ooh. yes please! :)

Response from rubyanjel (Reviewer)

Okay.At last, i made the fan art. I don't know what made me do this :D and sorry if it looks a little crappy. The description's listed at the artist's comment.:)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

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Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

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Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Looks cool! :)

10/10

HBAR

I love how Minerva already knew all about Severus and Hermione.  I hope that Hermione will talk with her too.  If two witches are plotting against him, he can't win.  I'm hoping that the fan club makes another appearance before all is said and done.  They kind of grew on me.  And maybe Harry and Ron will get on board.  Hell, the man doesn't stand a chance... thankfully.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

He's as stubborn as a mule and just as ornery. But time will tell. ;)

0/10

quaffswinegaily

The return of the frock coat. When does she get to defrock him?

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Now, that's the 50 million dollar question.  Not telling. :P

0/10

kimbee73

Go Hermione go!

He'll give in. I just know it.

Update soon. Great job!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

She's working on it! :)

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Hm, in-steam measuring!! Nice

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

LOL.  Perv! :P

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)

You know it LOL

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

These two working together in the Muggle world, now this should be interesting!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Who's guiding who? :)

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)

What a power struggle!!! LOL

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

ROFLMAO!!! Enough said...

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

:D

10/10

mimmom

HAH!  This is great.  Can't wait for the next bit!  YAY!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks! :)

10/10

snitchette

So, I guess Minerva is the one witch sendeing her Patronus. And I'd love to have Hermione execute her threat to Sev. Soon would be better for both their sake. *grin*

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Frustration messes with your mind... ;)

10/10

fynnsmom

This is too funny.  I loved the discussion towards the end about Severus getting his teeth fixed.  Sometimes he whines like a little old lady:D  I was laughing out loud.  I'm really kind of surprised that he can play the sax so well.  I thought Kingsley was exaggerating.   Great chapter.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks! :)

10/10

kimbee73

Yeah Hermione! She did what she said she would and he went along. He'll see the light I know it.Thanks and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks for reviewing! :)

10/10

rubyanjel

yey! woah. things are really heated here.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

LOL. Thanks. :)

10/10

mimmom

silly Snape.  He's so often his own worst enemy.  Still, I find it rather endearing.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Don't you want to smack him though? :)

Response from mimmom (Reviewer)

I really do!  It's maddening.  It's fun in fanfiction and fantasy.  I dated a guy who was about that insecure.  He wasn't mean and angry and snarky to protect himself.  He was kind of pathetic and it got really old.  "Nobody would ever date me, I should become a priest."  Ummm, that's what he said to me when I first told him I wanted to go out with him.  I was 16.  He was 18.  Excuse me, but you have a ready and willing woman right in front of you, dumbass.

10/10

teddybear

I can't wait to see what happens when Hermione and Snape are at Hogwarts together. 

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

You'll find out next week! :)

10/10

HBAR

Oh how I wish this would never end!  I'll have to start now preparing for how I'll cope with life after CTMEOY :)  I love that Luna knows what the badge means and is totally not fussed by it's implication.And yay, they finally hooked up.  Pity, no flying through time and space ;)   At least she is sensible enough to enjoy it for what is was.  And he actually said he loved her!  I was going to award points to his house, but then he left without telling her and left a note.  And while it was a nice enough note, it was, well, a note.  How much more obvious can she make it that she is fully committed to being with him?And then there are my favorite boys. The fact that they want to rush off to defend her honor earned an awwww...  The fact that Ron is already defending his future girlfriend earned a giant LOL.  And the fact that they are rushing off to butt in to what is none of their business by contacting the fan club earned an "oh dear." *hides face in hands, but secretly peeks through fingers hoping that we actually get to see the scene with the meeting*I hope that Severus really does talk to Minerva about his feelings for Hermione.  He can even give the details if he likes, but I would suggest he omits the part where he chants about her knickers, lest she misunderstand his intent and shows up to join them next time ;)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

ROFL re Minerva joining them!  And thanks for the lovely review. :)

10/10

Becky

Wonderful, wonderful, Poor Severus and his insecure heart...Bless him...I hope Hermione can convince him she does Love him and won't change her mind...WELL DONE!!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thank you! :)

0/10

quaffswinegaily

What's he going to talk to Minerva about?

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Even Sev needs a little maternal advice form time to time.  Or at least advice on how to avoid a determined young witch. ;)

10/10

snitchette

Finally!! 'T was about time! I'm sooo looking forward their come back to school and the discussion with Minerva.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

She may surprise him. :)

10/10

Nessa

Stubborn Severus!!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Sure is! :)

0/10

quaffswinegaily

Can I have a WILF fridge magnet? Silly me - got one already!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

LOL. Funny that. :)

10/10

mimmom

Ohhh yesss, quite a lovely WILF.  LOL.  This story is SO much fun.  I love when Hermione walks in on Severus.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Hehe. :)

0/10

kimjo2

lovely!  you do such wonderful banter!  thanks and mucho smoochies

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thank you! :)

10/10

rubyanjel

hahaha. i thought at first, "what the hell is WILF? and then i realized it after reading the author's notes. ahaha. i love snape's new shirt. hahahahahaha. haha. you're right, waiting would be in a week. haha. i bet the next one would be too.  so excited for the next one!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

LOL. Glad you got the WILF bit.  :)

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