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Can't Take My Eyes Off You Chapter 10: Chapter Ten: Tennis, Anyone?
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Can't Take My Eyes Off You

1: Chapter One: Watching

2: Chapter Two: Under Orders

3: Chapter Three: Planning the Mission

4: Chapter Four: Studying Together

5: Chapter Five: Another Know-it-all

6: Chapter Six: Investigations

7: Chapter Seven: Happy Birthday, Hermione

8: Chapter Eight: Halloween

9: Chapter Nine: A Private Moment

10: Chapter Ten: Tennis, Anyone?

11: Chapter Eleven: Giving Into Temptation

12: Chapter Twelve: Frustration Leads to Revelation

13: Chapter Thirteen: Spy Tactics

14: Chapter Fourteen: Explaining Magic

15: Chapter Fifteen: Back to Class

16: Chapter Sixteen: Return to Magic

17: Chapter Seventeen: Christmas Comes But Once a Year

18: Chapter Eighteen: New Year's Eve

19: Chapter Nineteen: Back to Hogwarts

20: Chapter Twenty: Avoiding the Issue

21: Chapter Twenty-one: Poetry and Roses

22: Chapter Twenty-two: Can't Take My Eyes Off You

23: Epilogue

Chapter Ten: Tennis, Anyone?

Can't Take My Eyes Off You

Chapter 10 of 23

sunny33

Hermione plays tennis. Snape enjoys it far too much.

Humor Romance Action/Adventure Epilogue What Epilogue? Severus Big Bang 50,451 Words 23 Chapters Complete
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Chapter Ten: Tennis, Anyone?

“I wonder where Mr Sneyd is this morning. It’s not like him to be late, even on a Sunday.”

“Yeah, Cathy. I haven’t seen him at all.”

“Do you think he had too much to drink last night and slept in? Have you seen him, Harmony?”

“Why would you think I had seen him?”

“Why are you blushing then? Have you seen him?”

“I haven’t seen him have breakfast, Lee.”

“Look! There he is. Wow, he looks a little flushed… and sort of sexy.”

“You always think he looks sexy, Amelia.”

“No. I mean he looks like he has just been shagged. Do you think… Why are you giggling, Harmony?”

“Er… Nothing. Just laughing at your reasoning. Sneyd looks a little rumpled this morning, and you immediately deduct he’s been having sex. Perhaps he’s just a little tired after his big night out.”

“Well, he was dancing with you a lot. Perhaps you wore him out.”

“Oh, I’m sure my hands are clean. It must have been you girls.”

“We only had one dance each, not like some people, who had at least four.”

“Six.”

“What, Amelia, you were counting?”

“Six! You lucky tart! What have you got that we haven’t?”

“Magic?”

***

“Anything?”

“No. Not a trace. She must have thought everyone was still at the ball the other night. Just sheer luck I came back a little earlier than the rest.”

“You didn’t notice anyone else slipping away early, then?”

“No. And I’ve talked to all three of them about the ball. Who they went with, how they enjoyed it, and how long they stayed. Nothing. Have you had a chance to check their records?”

“Not yet. I’m collecting them this afternoon. I thought you might like to join me after your last class to help. I’m sure another pair of eyes wouldn’t go amiss.”

“I’d like to help, but I won’t be free until after dinner. I have sports practice.”

“After dinner will be fine, around six-thirty? Meet me at the door we used last time – we’ll use my office. Call it extra tuition if you need an excuse. Merlin knows your classmates will believe it. I know you’re supposed to be playing the average student, but you really took it too far today. You don’t have to act completely clueless.”

“A little overdone, was it?”

“Even Mr Weasley could have answered that question with more insight.”

“Ouch.”

“Indeed. May I ask what sport you have chosen?”

“Tennis. And I’m hopeless. I can’t seem to get the racquet to connect with the ball. I’ve read all the books about techniques, and it just doesn’t help. I always miss the ball by a split second.”

“Not everything comes from books, Granger. You must have some hand-eye coordination, or you wouldn’t be so proficient with Charms. It’s simply your timing. No doubt you’re over-thinking each swing. Try to relate it to using your wand – set your body free from your mind and just let instinct take over.”

“I thought you weren’t interested in foolish wand-waving.”

“Have you seen me demonstrating duelling?”

“Yes.”

“Did I use a wand?”

“Yes.”

“Well?”

“It was like watching you dance… Your wand was an extension of your body… It all just flowed.”

“Exactly. Now think of your tennis racquet in the same way. You’re not holding it, merely using it as an extension of your arm.”

“How do you know so much about tennis?”

“I know nothing about tennis. But I have seen it played, and the same principles apply.”

“Oh. Well, I’ll give it a try. Thanks!”

“You’re welcome. Six-thirty then?”

“I’ll be there.”

***

Hermione

Bloody hell. What’s he doing here? Couldn’t help himself I suppose. Had to come and watch me make an idiot of myself.

Oof. Didn’t even see that one coming. How does someone hit the ball that hard? How does someone actually hit the damned ball? Think of it like your wand, he said. I’d like to see you try it, git!

Missed again!

Oh, just look at the bastard smirk. He’s enjoying this far too much. Now he’s waving his hand like a wand. Okay, I get it!

Here it comes.

It’s not a tennis racquet. It’s an extension of my arm.

It’s not a… Hey! I hit it!

And the sarcastic one is applauding.

Take that!

Ah. That’s the trick. Pretend they are Snape’s balls you are hitting over the net.

If he ever mentions this at Hogwarts, it’ll be canaries for him!

***

Snape

Granger should wear shorts and skimpy tops more often. Preferably not in front of any young men.

Just me.

Pervert.

She really is hopeless. I don’t think she could hit the ball if it was three times slower. Remember the water balloons, Granger. You had no problem tossing them around. I suppose she used magic then.

Come on, Granger. Relax. Think of your wand like I told you.

That’s it.

That’s my girl!

Why is she looking at me like that? Have I done something wrong?

***

“Do you fancy a walk after dinner, Harmony? Lee and Amelia are keen to wander down to the village shop for some sweets.”

“I’d love to, but I have to meet Mr Sneyd up at the school at six-thirty. He wasn’t particularly impressed with my performance in class today and offered me a catch-up session.”

“Lucky you, getting him all to yourself. I hope you behave yourselves.”

“Cathy! He’s a teacher!”

“Just saying – you, him, alone. He seems to like you, you know.”

“He’s just doing his job. Teaching. Nothing else.”

“Okay. Okay. Don’t get your knickers in a knot!”

“Hi. What’s up with you two? You look like you’ve been arguing. Coming to the village, Harmony?”

“No, Lee. I’m studying.”

“With Seth.”

“I’d like to have private lessons with Seth. Private anatomy lessons!”

“Amelia!”

“What? Don’t try and tell me you haven’t thought the same? Well, Lee and Cathy, anyway.”

“Oh, yes.”

“Definitely!”

***

A/N: I'm not sure why this chapter ended up so short. It's just the way it turned out.

This was written for the Severus Big Bang Birthday Bash on LIveJournal. Many thanks to karelia for the beta. Hugs to Amelia for... well, just being Amelia!

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Latest 25 Reviews for Can't Take My Eyes Off You

315 Reviews  |  7.0/10 Average

10/10

HBAR

Just here for a reread as I was due for some lighthearted entertainment, and I loved this all over again.  I'm still floored that reading dialogue only didn't become tedious or confusing.  It's times like this I wish I had some talent, because this story would make some great fan art.  I miss reading new fic from you.  Are you retired forever?

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

I'm still reading fanfic at times, but at the moment music consumes all my time. The only thing I write now is basslines! 

10/10

ChiffonShock

I adored this! One of the best things I've read in ages! Well done!!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks! :)

10/10

jadecadence

perfectly complementary dialogue! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks. :)

10/10

Gemini Sister

Yes, I have read this story. Loved it. I did like the whole concept of Severus and Hermione having to attend a Muggle school as pupil and teacher. I have always imagined Severus if in a Muggle role as a long haired musician, tight jeans, leather jacket with dark t shirt with some logo on it. I think you did a grand job of this whole fic.

Having the story from Severus and Hermione's POV was a superb idea and hearing the two sides of each situation was hillarious.

Thanks for writing and posting .

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I had a ball writing it! :)

10/10

moor

You had me dying w/ some of the dialogue, it was so fantastic!! :DExcellent work!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks for all your reviews so far. xx:)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks for all your reviews so far. xx:)

10/10

mick42

Perfect ending, thank you so much, for this funny,light hearted, story .

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks for all your lovely reviews.  If you like humour, might I suggest  Carrot Tops and Unspeakable Plans or Don't Stop me Now if you haven't already read them. :D

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

Thanks I will.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks for all your lovely reviews.  If you like humour, might I suggest  Carrot Tops and Unspeakable Plans or Don't Stop me Now if you haven't already read them. :D

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

Thanks I will.

10/10

mick42

At long last love has arrived.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Hehe.  Took her a while! :)

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

Yes, but he's worth it, and so is she. { I/m sure Sev /Seth would agree} if I haven't said it before, thank you.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Hehe.  Took her a while! :)

Response from mick42 (Reviewer)

Yes, but he's worth it, and so is she. { I/m sure Sev /Seth would agree} if I haven't said it before, thank you.

10/10

mick42

Are the owls in the right order? Put it together Hermione=

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Nope.  They are all mixed up deliberately. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Nope.  They are all mixed up deliberately. :)

10/10

mick42

What the hell,is Draco up to?

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Mischief? ;)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Mischief? ;)

10/10

mick42

Poor sevvie, everyone is picking on him. Go get him Hermione.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

He needs to be picked on occasionally. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

He needs to be picked on occasionally. :)

10/10

mick42

Great that they are together, at last. Trust Severus to do the noble{ and dumb } thing. I hope Minervia can talk some sense inti him.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

You'll see. ;)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

You'll see. ;)

10/10

mick42

WILF! and she's wearing it, will she explain it to molly?

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Not bloody likely! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Not bloody likely! :)

10/10

mick42

Love the banter with the boys, Harry and Ron come very close to the mark, even though, they think they are joking. The hug at the end , awwww, just perfect.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks. :)

10/10

mick42

OMG, that man is hard work, it's a good thing he's worth it. I loved the first year speech, the girls were a bit cheeky asking him, but he did it. Run Severus, stick your head in the sand, it matters not, Hermione has you in her sights, and she will have her way.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Indeed she will. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Indeed she will. :)

0/10

mick42

oops, I got so caught up, I forgot to review. Katrina is so young, and alone in the muggle world, easy prey, for someone like Edgely.Wonder what Sev's new Patronus is? 

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

I wonder too.  Can't remember now, I wrote that story so long ago! LOL

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

I wonder too.  Can't remember now, I wrote that story so long ago! LOL

10/10

mick42

KINGSLEY!!! spoil-sport, oh well ,there may be more PDA's to come. "The girls" are getting an education,aren't they. Love the duel, and the banter, they are well matched, in more ways than one.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

LOL.  Kingsley wasn't quite up with the play there. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

LOL.  Kingsley wasn't quite up with the play there. :)

10/10

mick42

Glad Hermione has someone to talk to, but I hope the girls don't get caught in the crossfire.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

;)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

;)

10/10

mick42

Lovely, hugs and kisses,just what they both need.Love the way Hermione, lies by telling the truth.  

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

She's almost Slytherin...

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

She's almost Slytherin...

10/10

mick42

"It'll be canaries for him" If severus knew what she is thinking, it would wipe that smirk, right off his face.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Sure would. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Sure would. :)

10/10

mick42

They are both as bad{or good} as each other. If you will excuse me ,I think I had better turn the fan on, it's getting a little warm in here.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Hehe! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Hehe! :)

10/10

mick42

So much fun, in this chapter,flirting, dancing  , ogling, { I don't know who has the biggest, inner pervert, Severus ,or Hermione} 

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Me neither! :)

10/10

mick42

What a Birthday present! and with extra vitriol, just the way we  like it.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

No-one does vitriol as well as Sev! :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

No-one does vitriol as well as Sev! :)

10/10

mick42

The dialogue reminds me of the screw-ball comedys. wonderful, that last line made me laugh so much, I cryed.   

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

10/10

mick42

I love their inner monologues,Hermione, hating the know it all, and "Mr Dreamy's" fan club, and Severus with his "pervert". 

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

:D

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

:D

10/10

mick42

Now we see how,Seth and Harmony,get on at school.Iloved the muisc scene, it was very cool.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks.  Glad you liked that bit. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Can't Take My Eyes Off You)

Thanks.  Glad you liked that bit. :)

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