Severus Snape by fizzabella
Chapter 2 of 11
Witches of EveSeverus has something to ask his beloved and has chosen to do so during the New Year's Eve Party.
ReviewedFizzabella — Severus Snape
I pause on the threshold of the Great Hall at Hogwarts and look around the huge, crowded room. I’ve already spotted Hermione sitting at a table with some of her friends from school days; she looks happy tonight and so lovely that I have to catch my breath. She’s dressed in something very dark green and—dare I say it—slinky. The silver and gold knotwork necklace I gave her for her birthday gleams around her neck, and the emeralds in the matching earrings twinkle in the candlelight.
Almost reflexively, my hand slides into the pocket of my robes where I check to make sure the little velvet box is still there. Minerva owled me in my quarters as I was getting ready for the party in a complete panic about whether we’d ordered enough wine, and as nervous as I am about my plans for later, I got distracted. This is the fourth or fifth time I have checked that pocket for that box, and I wish I could simply calm myself—I’m as nervous as a fourth year trying to work up the courage to ask a girl to the Yule Ball. What I plan to ask Hermione for later is considerably more than her company for four hours of her life on Christmas night. I force that thought to the back of my mind. I used to be quite good at directing my thoughts—the ability to do so is basic to being able to occlude one’s thoughts—but I have not had a need to practice Occlumency in five years, so I am a bit rusty, I suppose.
I let my gaze wander over the room as I make my way to Hermione. So many people are here tonight, the fifth New Year’s Eve since the defeat of Tom Riddle. Looking around the room, I see so many people who played such key roles in Riddle’s defeat. Minerva has gotten over her panic over the wine and is conversing with Horace Slughorn and Kingsley Shacklebolt. Horace is in his element; he has collected the Minister for Magic!
Hermione has been saving a seat for me, and she looks up as I approach. Amazing, that lovely smile is for me alone. Even as I reach the table, I see Minerva, Shacklebolt and Slughorn edging back towards the table. I wish I had thought to cast a repelling charm; I don’t particularly want an audience tonight.
“Severus! You look so handsome!” I seat myself on the bench next to her, and she leans close, wrapping her arm around me in a hug that I return.
I murmur into her ear, “You are so beautiful, it takes my breath away,” so the words belong only to the two of us, and smile to myself when she shivers. She’s made it clear she likes my voice; I find I like making her shiver. I look up from Hermione when I hear Miss Lovegood—Mrs. Scamander now—say that she hopes I will be promoted to Headmaster when Headmistress McGonagall retires. I blink in surprise when she adds she thought I was a good Headmaster before.
I express my surprise at her having thought so and add that she had been rather a pest that last school year before Riddle fell. She, along with Neville Longbottom and Ginevra Weasley, spent much of their sixth year provoking the Carrows, Riddle’s pet instructors at Hogwarts, and I feared for their safety. Secretly, I had admired them very much when I wasn’t trying to keep the Carrows from killing them. I was shocked out of my thoughts by Mrs. Scamander’s next question, though. After an artless comment about Nargles and sparkling wine not being a good combination, she asked, “Did Hermione say ‘yes’ when you gave her the ring?” The former Miss Lovegood had been rather good at Divination, but how did she know about the ring in its box in my pocket? Minerva looks over at us, and I must have an odd look on my face, because Minerva immediately turns to Mrs. Scamander and asks, “What are your New Year’s Resolutions, my dear?”
I immediately focus my attention on Hermione, and if Mrs. Scamander replies to the Headmistress, I don’t hear it.
Hermione leans close to whisper in my ear now. “A ring, Severus?”
Well. I had wondered how I would manage this. What do the Muggles say? Go with the flow? I reach into my pocket, draw out the velvet-covered box from the jeweler in Diagon Alley, and take out the ring I commissioned for Hermione. It’s platinum, set with an oval diamond in the center, a triangular-cut emerald on one side and a triangular-cut ruby on the other. She looks at the ring, glittering in my hand, and her eyes widen in surprise.
“Hermione,” I begin, wondering how to express my love to her, “you are so very precious to me. Will you do me the honor of becoming my wife?”
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Latest 25 Reviews for New Year's Eve Festivities
42 Reviews | 6.79/10 Average
Why does Chapter 10 read like Chapter 9?
I love this story and this chapter, it is the same as chapter 9 though
Love Poppy, even she needs to have fun once in awhile before handing out hangover potions the next day :)
You can see very clearly why Kingsley is so suitable for his job. He really is someone who binds people instead of deviding them. Very well done!
Very nice point of view from Kingsley Shacklebolt
Perfect. Wonder what happens next?
LOL. Naughty Nev! :)
Poor Sybill. A party without sherry. That's sacrilege! :)
Very nice. :)
Hmm. Wonder who? :)
She's a tease! :)
hat was brave , asking her in front of everyone. :)
Luna is so cool! :)
That was an interesting take on Sybill and I mean that in a good way *Grins*
LOL you got to love Draco... this was short but I liked it :)
Response from Witches of Eve (Author of New Year's Eve Festivities)
Ahh... thanks. This was originally supposed to be kind of a series of drabbles, so I kept it at the minimum. Not to mention the fact that I'm not nearly as talented as the two ladies that wrote the first 2 chapies. I only wish that I could come up with their descriptions, etc. Mine would have probably been longer if I did have that talent. But, hey, I'm just lucky to have my name listed with them. I keep thinking someone is going to realize that I don't belong in the same catagory with the rest of these greats. Wait until you see what's coming. ~*potterbrat*~
Response from Marty21 (Reviewer)
I can't wait to see whats coming. I know how you feel but at least you have done something I haven't the guts to do.....post a story on this site. *Grins*
Nice of Draco to finally grow up. Great job.
Response from Witches of Eve (Author of New Year's Eve Festivities)
Thank you. I like the Draco that is his own man.~*potterbrat*~
Nice little cliffie. Great writing Severus post war.
Hey sweetie, awesome first chapter. You rock.
I liked how he started off liking Luna, but then just couldn't quite commit to thinking something that nice, so changed it to lack of animosity. Way cooler, Draco.
Response from Witches of Eve (Author of New Year's Eve Festivities)
Thanks. I love that boy. Aside from Snape -- he's my very favorite Slytherin, with his Daddy running close behind.~*potterbrat*~
Wonder how many times he would have felt for that box if Luna hadn't asked? Very nice chapter.
That was delightful!
Well I might be upset with Luna for ruining his surprise, if I wasn't worried that if left to his own devices, he might chicken out. Nice chapter.
Of course she says yes...
This is awesome...you capture our Luna so well
She said yes.. right??