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Severus at the Aborigine Campfire
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Hahaha! Hallucinogenic influence or not, be careful where you wave your wood, Severus! All sorts of avalanches can occur! Enjoyed this altered-state blend of humour meshed with bitter self-reflection, self-denial and regret battling with an underlining mixture of proudness, selflessness and unconditional loyalty!
Response from Amita (Author of Severus at the Aborigine Campfire)
The natives gave Severus drugs that took him halfway to self awareness, but they underestimated the strength of his self-loathing, his pride, and his anger. They do, however, recognize he's dangerous in his current state. Glad you enjoyed this strange tale.
LOL That was too funny. Thank you for making me smile.
Response from Amita (Author of Severus at the Aborigine Campfire)
Thanks. Not everyone appreciates outrageous humor.
OMG! These hallucinations are curious.
Response from Amita (Author of Severus at the Aborigine Campfire)
Are they hallucinations or truer than canon?
LOL, very interesting hallucinations.
Response from Amita (Author of Severus at the Aborigine Campfire)
It's possible that they are Severus just a bit over the edge.
Damn tricky stick. Causes all sorts of problems. :)
Response from Amita (Author of Severus at the Aborigine Campfire)
Except Severus's complaint is that it hasn't caused enough.
Oh dear Merlin's tits! What sis they ggive the guy? LOL He blasted a hole in front of the natives? Good holy Circe - lol!
Response from Amita (Author of Severus at the Aborigine Campfire)
The natives may not be restless, but they are getting nervous.
Spontaneous avalances my buttcheeks, lol.
Response from Amita (Author of Severus at the Aborigine Campfire)
Thanks. I'm pleasantly surprised to get a decent review for this strange piece of work.
Response from Twilexis (Reviewer)
I pictured this to be held somewhere in the bushland near Uluru. I'm Australian and part Koori, so I can picture the elders trying to explain the Dreamtime to Severus. And his response lol
That was well done.
Response from Amita (Author of Severus at the Aborigine Campfire)
Thanks. It's an unusual story, and I hesitated before posting it.