Uncoffined
Chapter 1 of 13
Lady of ClunnWhen all is lost, we are willing to do whatever it takes to survive.
ReviewedA/N: My eternal gratitude to nastygrl, who is a brilliant beta - all remaining mistakes are mine and mine alone. Thank you for the breathtaking banner, draconis23 and for giving feedback and keeping my English on this continent.
Uncoffined has won second place at the dramione_awards on LJ in the category best WIP (WIP in 2009).
Uncoffined
Regret it, we will.
The bodies of the dead left behind from the final battle fell limply into the gigantic hole the Death Eaters had blasted before the proud but blackened towers of Hogwarts. There was no practical need for this mass grave; they could have simply cast stasis charms on the corpses until a family member identified and collected the remains.
No, this was a display of power. It was showing the few, terrified onlookers what was in store for those who dared to rise up. They would then in turn carry the message to the communities and villages.
Hermione could hear the muffled sobs and anguished cries from the edge of the pit. Behind her, Arthur Weasley had wrapped one arm around his wife's waist and arms; his other hand covered her mouth. It had been a risk to return from their hideout in the Forbidden Forest so soon, but patrolling Death Eaters, hunger and the need to see their loved ones one last time had driven them out to the edge of the dark woods.
They had found their survival kit undisturbed by others. They did not know how many other cells had survived, as none knew about the other. You could not tell what you did not know. When they had used the healing potions, resized their shrunken clean clothes and vanished the blood soaked and torn battle gear, the remaining potions and clothes for at least 15 others were returned to their hiding place.
Arthur and George manipulated the time pieces on their wrists, and instantly, their hair darkened from the bright red of their family to an indiscriminate shade of brown. Their features changed as well; not much, just enough to make sure they were not easily recognised, not too much to maintain permanently by the charmed jewellery.
Molly helped her daughter to put on the choker necklace before Ginny turned and helped her mother. Hermione hesitated a moment; seeing the Weasleys devoid of the vibrant colour of their hair was strange and frightening. Finally, she shook the feeling off while struggling to close her own choker. The lock of the necklace was strong; charmed to be opened only by the wearer. It was kept close to the neck so it was in constant contact with the skin.
Hermione surveyed her hands, the skin tone of her arms and the locks that were hanging down over her shoulders and breasts. Her hair had not changed much as far as she could see, maybe it had darkened a bit, but it was otherwise just as curly and long as it had been for a long time now.
"Did it work?" She asked, her voice shaky.
Molly stepped forward and caressed her cheek.
"You don't look like yourself, love." She drew Hermione into her arms and kissed her hair. "I know it's frightening, but you are Jeanne now, and I am Mum; you have to remember."
***
Having shed their past and identities, they had crept closer to the edge of the forest under a Disillusionment charm and watched the pit being filled. Along with the final battle at Hogwarts, the Death Eaters had attacked nearly every wizarding settlement that had not already pledged allegiance to their Lord. Villages were inhabitable, razed to the ground and brimming with dark magic. The human catastrophe also meant hope for the survivors of the battle. They just had to seep into the treks of refugees. There was no better way to hide than in plain sight.
Another body, one with bright red hair, joined the pile of tangled limbs. Molly sobbed into her husband's hand.
Was it Ron? Hermione wondered. Or Bill, or Charlie? Fred?
All of them were in there somewhere. Uncoffined.
***
Despite the outward appearance of general disorganisation and lack of hierarchy in Voldemort's ranks, the new regime took charge in a frighteningly swift and effective manner.
Key positions were quickly covered by high-ranking Death Eaters; Muggle-born and halfblood laws were put into effect immediately. The refugees were regarded suspiciously, since they had lost their homes fighting against the new government. Or simply not jumping fast enough to accept their new liege.
An area between Diagon and Knockturn Alley had been cleared and enlarged, then declared the re-settlement area for all refugees.
The cramped houses along the windy streets now served as lodging houses, providing one room per family and, if they were lucky, a communal bathroom and kitchen. For the not-so-lucky had to use the public hearths, street water pumps and public outhouses.
The Warren, as it was called now, was little more than a ghetto, a breeding ground for disease, crime and prostitution.
Employment was sparse, and to legally work, Ministry papers were needed. Muggle-borns were not allowed to enter into salaried employment. Halfbloods could obtain the necessary papers, but many struggled to pay the fees and bribes in order to receive the precious, life-saving documents.
***
It had been nearly three months; three months of fighting against the constant threat of discovery, starvation and infection.
One day, Ginny's injury-weakened body succumbed to the cold dampness of the walls, the poisonous mildew growing in the corners and the lack of nutrition. Her once petite, but strong frame now jutted bones, dying little by little, day by day.
One day, George did not return from his search for food. They waited a long time. When it was evident that he would not be coming back, Molly grew very quiet. She merely went through the motions of daily life, if one could still call it a life.
One day, she sat with her back against the wall in the corner that was their "dining area".
"I will lie down for a little while."
Molly had shuffled over to the lumpy mattress on the floor that she shared with her husband and crept under the thin blanket. From then on, she only got up when it was absolutely necessary.
Arthur had been out all day, standing in line at the occupational office of the Ministry, hoping to receive one of the day jobs clearing destroyed areas. It was when he came home, worn out and greyer than ever, that Hermione could not take it anymore and fled, oblivious to the frightened shout of her adoptive father.
Roaming the Warren streets at dusk or even after nightfall was dangerous at best.
***
The red lipstick was perfectly painted on her perfectly formed lips, and thin translucent scraps of fabric were strategically draped over the beautiful witch's body.
She had been brought over by the hostess and had immediately straddled him, rubbing her pert breasts against him.
The guest of honour stared at the khol rimmed eyes, the sparkling blusher on her cheekbones and her long, long, red fingernails, raking over his robes.
Like claws.
He looked around. They'd had a horrible week of flushing out members of the resistance that were still hiding in forests or trying to survive the fallout of dark magic in the former wizarding dwellings. Those were the hardest to forget. Insane with the sheer force of darkness, they were hardly recognisable as humans.
His men were taking full advantage of the distractions offered at the revel. Blaise Zabini was draped over a low chaise longue, a girl between his legs while he feasted on the bare breasts of another.
Theodore Nott and Marcus Flint were sharing a pretty blonde witch.
Today he had had to kill a young woman, one about his age. He did not remember her from Hogwarts, but with house rivalry being what it had been, she might well have been one of his classmates. He had found her in the corner of a ruined house, clutching a teacup that was missing half the handle. Upon seeing him, she had snarled like an animal in a trap and leapt at him.
When he closed his eyes he could see hers, those blue eyes that no longer recognised a fellow human being.
She had fallen at his curse. Death relaxed her features, and he could see that she had been pretty. A nice girl in a nice little village, with a nice family that was no more.
Hands worked on his belt, and he looked into the eyes of the dancing girl on her knees before him.
Blue eyes.
Without thinking he backhanded her sharply.
"Who allowed you such liberties, wench?"
The girl was sprawled on the floor, a hand covering her cheek, her eyes startled only for a mere second before she scrambled away into the crowd.
Draco Malfoy stood abruptly and stalked from the room. In the corridor, he waved Gregory Goyle and Vincent Crabbe away from their own girls.
"Greg, Vince, I'll be in my quarters here, over the weekend. Bring me a distraction." He rubbed his face with a weary hand. "Bring me... something different. Something not so shrill and bright. It hurts my soul tonight."
"And no blue eyes," he added as an afterthought.
His friends looked at him without true comprehension, but nodded. If the High Reeve wanted something, the High Reeve got it.
***
So pretty.
She had not seen such pretty colours since... She had to think hard; since before this life.
Red and yellow. Green and purple. Orange.
Colours of the entire spectrum lay in piles in front of the green grocer's store. He knew very well just how precious his merchandise was. Two hired guns, or would that be wands?, stood next to the exuberant crates filled with tasty ingredients for meals none of them had enjoyed since the new reign had begun.
The two burly men directed their attention to a young boy who was inching suspiciously close. Uncrossing their arms, they reached for their wands and proceeded in shooing him away.
Undetected by the two and most of the crowd, a small girl had crept up to the stand from the other side and had started stuffing vegetables and fruit into her pockets.
Hermione stared.
Nobody paid her any heed.
There were only two paces between her and not being hungry, not being sick.
Before she even knew that she had made a decision, a red bell pepper was in her hand. The small girl nodded her head curtly then turned to run. The quick motion drew the attention of the hired help. They took in the running girl and Hermione standing with a bright vegetable in her hand.
She spun around and ran into the opposite direction.
Footsteps behind her.
There were too many people on the streets, and she was not fast enough. She could not get around them quickly; she was dodging left and right and turning corners without seeing where she was going.
And always, the heavy footsteps were behind her.
Turning a corner into a narrow alleyway, salvation stood in an archway, not twenty paces away from her.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Uncoffined
57 Reviews | 6.09/10 Average
I love your fic!!!! It's really well written and it was a great idea to use the all ghetto stuff like in the Second War. Very original! What a hypocritical people! She was trying to survive as anyone alse. What did they expect? She proclaims herself the new boy-who-lived? Been in the front of the war once (and during years) is meritorious enough, while many of the people who criticized her just sat down; she had the same right they had (even more) to don't be one of the heads this time. And she did help with her map, probably even times before it.Julius is a cutie!! So young and so astute! I'm happy that Draco and Hermione finally ended together =] Kisses
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!People tend to be hypocritical. After WW II, most members of the resistance, who had not a prominent place in some sort of assassination attempt or such, but risked their lives everyday nevertheless, had a hard time to be recognised at all.I love Julius! He'll be a force to be reckoned with!
I'm glad this was a featured story, I missed it initially. Well crafted and a delight to read. Thank you
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
A featured story?*checks*OMG! How did I miss THAT??Thank you! I am glad you liked it!
Bloody brilliant! Loved it.
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
Thank you so much for the lovely review!I am glad you liked it :)
Another great chapter
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
Thank you!I am glad that you like it!The next chapter will go into the queue by tonight.
All things considered two years is not that much, but wow, how intense.
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
Two years is not that much, you are right. But then, he had a strong witness to speak for him and the Wizengamot is not exactly known for fair trials.I imagine Blaise will be in Azkaban for longer...Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Awwwwwwwwww. Great Update! I can't wait to read more.
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
Thank you!I'll put the next chapter in the queue tonight :)
His actions after Snape's death were an indication he was not as evil as he had been portrayed. Luckily Hermione found the real Draco. :)
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
Thank you for the lovely review!Both Draco and Hermione are quite fortunate that they found each other. :)
Seriously!!! I wait with baited breath for your next update, and I highly doubt he would hate her.
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
Ah, you never know with those driven-to-near-insanity pure bloods. Thank you for reading and reviewing!The next chapter should be up very shortly :)
Please update this soon. I so much do not like evil cliffies!
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!The next chapter should be up very, very soon, maybe even today :)Evil cliffies hurt so good, don't they?
Where did she go? To fight for or against him?
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!I think she went to a safe place to think things through and come to terms with the new situation.
Sigh.
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
Thank you for reading and revieiwng!Sigh, indeed. Their lives get ever more complicated.The next chapter should be up any time now :)
ARGH! Please update soon! Please Please Please!
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!I am doing mey best :)The next chapter might even be up today...
Hi! I am loving this story - but this chapter seems to be missing the end? It is cut off in the middle.I also friended you on LJ and would love to follow you there!
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!Goodness! I am quite sure the chapter was complete a little while back. Thank you for pointing it out - I fixed it :)Sorry for the slow reaction, RL was somewhat hellish lately.And thank you for friending me - I friended you back!
I hope she does leave. But I am quite interested to see what you do next.
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
It is necessary for her to leave. The world outside has not stopped turning and she did not forget the purpose for which she entered this arrangement.This does not mean it will not hurt badly...
Oh my gosh, please please please update soon!
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!I am so glad you like the story!I just checked the queue and the next chapter should be up very soon :)
I love the imagery of the falcon and Draco and Hermione watching it fly away.
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
Thank you!I like the falcon, too :) They had to share a bit of normalcy and something akin to happiness. Soon, they will need all the good memories...
I hope and pray they don't get caught.
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!They play a dangerous game and there are more ways than one to get caught...
Wow. This was something.
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
Thank you:)I don't know why, how or since when, but this chapter had been partially erased, so I don't know whether you have been able to read it entirely.I fixed that now.
Oh my. I don't know what i hope. LOL
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
It does not look good either way, does it?Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Wow. Hard to believe that Draco could be like that.
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
This is a very, very ruthless universe and Draco has to be ruthless in order to maintain his position.A lot of people are wearing masks, Death Eater masks and others.
This is so sad. :(
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!It is sad indeed. What makes it even sadder for me is that this is a rather typical war scenario.
I've just read this story straight through, and you'veconjured up a truly ugly world; just as it would havebeen under Voldemort, I'm sure. I wonder who the Warren girl is - I hope it's not Ginny!
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
Thank you for the lovely review!The girl is not Ginny. I always thought that there must be many, many more members of the Order of the Phoenix than the ones we know.Who the woman in Diagon Alley was will be revealed in chapter 12 :)
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
Thank you for the lovely review!The girl is not Ginny. I always thought that there must be many, many more members of the Order of the Phoenix than the ones we know.Who the woman in Diagon Alley was will be revealed in chapter 12 :)
Oh, dear.
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
Yes. Oh, dear.Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Oh, poor, poor Hermione! And who was our Order member, hmm?
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!Yes, Hermione certainly got a reminder of what is happening in the outside world.The order member.That shall be revealed in *checks* chapter 12.
I have finished reading the entire story over at ETB. I had my heart in my throat when I finally saw your last up date. I have to say, with all kindness, I was a bit let down with your ending. It was almost like you had tired of the story and did a sudden and loveless wrap. I would have loved to see more of the story from Draco's POV after he was released from prison, mirrored from Hermione's story. For each left, his right, you know? Only taking place from after prison. Remember what Hermione and the others had to go through to survive and their feelings? How they were shunted aside? What would have his life been after, AFTER V? Still, a breathtaking idea and a well written one, as well. I would like to see others take on this idea. Might be as popular as the ministry marrage nightmare. Thanks for a very wonderful read.Love you,
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
Response from Lady of Clunn (Author of Uncoffined)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!I am sorry that you feel let down by the ending. I certainly was not/am not tired of the story. I just don't like endings that are too final. I wanted to leave room for thoughts.But I am thinking of a sequel about the life after Voldemort, I only thought this would be a different story to tell, with a different feel to it.Just wondering: why didn't you put this in a review for chapter 13 over at ETB?Anyhow, I am glad you liked the idea for the story and I would also love to see other peoples take on it.Take care,LOC