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Without You Chapter 1: Without You
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Without You

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Without You

Without You

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luvsev

Harry's thoughts about Severus.

Drabble/100-Word Slash Forbidden Forest 212 Words 1 Chapter Complete
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Without you, there is no sun, stars

Only perpetual darkness.

Without you, there is no one,

No guiding angels, no one to ease the pain

Only daemons to fight.

Without you, life is empty, pointless.

There is no one for whom to fight.

Only your breath, your light...

Is worth anything at all.


Lying in the dark, a candle flickering, illuminating the rain-streaked windows and your pale, gaunt face, I hear you breathe... in and out, slow and steady like the rain. I take your elegant hand, rough and stained from a life lived too fast and too precariously, and I raise it to my lips. A gentle kiss pressed to the scar on your third knuckle makes your breath hitch.

‘Look at me, Severus. I want you to see how much you mean to me.’

Your eyes, open and full of lust, gaze up at me as I enter you. ‘Harry, please.’

My movements are slow, deliberate, though you wish for me to increase the pace. I want every thrust, every kiss to show you.

‘I’m close,’ you whisper against my neck.

One more thrust, and you’re there. I follow you, whispering, ‘Severus, you are everything to me.’


Thanks to peppermint for the quick beta.


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Latest 25 Reviews for Without You

3 Reviews  |  6.0/10 Average

10/10

snitchette

Love it. Gave me shivers.

Response from luvsev (Author of Without You)

*beams* I'm truly pleased you loved it!

8/10

morgaine_dulac

Not my cup of tea, this pairing, but beautifully written and therefore very much worth the read.

Response from luvsev (Author of Without You)

Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment! :) I'm glad you decided to read it even though you don't care for the pairing.

0/10

sunny33

Sweet, luv. :)

Response from luvsev (Author of Without You)

Aww, thanks, Penny!

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