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Saturday Night Drabbles Unrequited
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Unrequited

sunny33

14 Reviews   |   14 Ratings, 0 Likes, 6 Favorites )

Angst Drabble/100-Word Saturday Night Drabbles 530 Words 1 Chapter Complete

A man's love remains unrequited.

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sunny33

Member Since 2008  |  129 Stories  |  Favorited by 689  |  8,383 Reviews Written  |  8,235 Review Responses

Hello all,  I am a 53 year old from NZ.  Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing.  Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)

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10/10

HBAR

*Sniffles*  If only they'd been introduced to fanfiction, they might have been convinced of how right they are together. :)This is angstier (I might have made that up!) than your usual fare, but as with everything, you do it well!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Unrequited)

Thanks, love. :)

0/10

nursegladys

oh thats so sad Penny! lovely though

Response from sunny33 (Author of Unrequited)

Thanks, darlin'. :)

0/10

tenoh27

So bittersweet, thank you.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Unrequited)

Thanks. :)

10/10

snitchette

That is so sad and so unrespectful of her children to simply burn her things like that.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Unrequited)

Thanks for reviewing. :)

0/10

kimjo2

wow!  that was angsty to the max!  great stuff.  thanks and christmas and holiday smoochies

Response from sunny33 (Author of Unrequited)

Thanks!  Merry Xmas! :)

10/10

sregner

So Hermione knew too....sigh :-(

Response from sunny33 (Author of Unrequited)

She did, but was too afraid to explore the possibility. :)

10/10

blue artemis

I can well imagine this happening to her. 

Response from sunny33 (Author of Unrequited)

Yes.  Thanks for reviewing, blue. :)

10/10

droxy

SQUWEEEEEEEEE!Oh this is angsty, heartbreaking, and bitter.  Well done.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Unrequited)

Thanks, drox! :D

0/10

quaffswinegaily

So angsty. Ah! What might have been. P.S.You can't blame Droxy for your murderous tendencies

Response from sunny33 (Author of Unrequited)

Yes I can.  She Imperio'ed me.  Honest! :P

10/10

indigo_rose

That was chock full of angst!  Poor Hermione...where was that Gryffindor courage and bravery when she needed to take a chance and say something to him?  And how horrible that her kids didn't even want to keep the mementos that were important to their mother as keepsakes of their own.  I think the poet John Greenleaf Whittier said it best: "For all sad words of tongue and pen, the saddest are these, 'It might have been'."  Very well done, and thanks for sharing it with us.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Unrequited)

Thank you. :)

10/10

beaweasley2

How sad. One word, one smile and their life would have been so different. If either of them had jsut said something. *sigh* I thougth Hermione only took ten NEWT classes? Or are there more don't know about from canon? I know Percy and Dumbeldore too twelve, that's the maxium number, isn't  it?

Response from sunny33 (Author of Unrequited)

No idea about the classes really, but her kids were only assuming they knew.  :)

10/10

isalie

Oh. Oh my. That was my first story to start my morning. The stupid idea was, to do so without breakfast and morning tea.Congratulations: I cried.But I tell you that: Angst is something else, I think.

That might be my empty stomach, but now I have a mighty wish to go over there and strangle some children of her. Could they be any more insensitive?! Must be their father's genes...

In short: That drabble left me angry and sad. And I shouldn't like that, but I do. It was very gripping and captivating written.

 

And, um, I voted. Despite journal entries. It's Christmastide. You might want to use them as Christmas tree decorations.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Unrequited)

I needed some pretties for the tree. LOL.  Thanks for the review,

Response from sunny33 (Author of Unrequited)

. :)

0/10

WriterMerrin

*blinks away tears*

Response from sunny33 (Author of Unrequited)

Aw, don't cry, love.  'Tis only a story. :)

10/10

Owlbait

Kill her off and without Snape too, why don't you?  ~smacks them both~

Response from sunny33 (Author of Unrequited)

Muhahaha! :P

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