Very interesting story so far - I like mysteries.  Lin is a good invention as a character.  I like your legal verdict on Snape's case: Dumbledore a suicide with Snape being the weapon of choice!  

lwow, could it be Snape? So much is going on. Looking forward to updates. It is a very well written story, I like your Lin and the way you portrait Snape

I am enjoying looking at criminality in the wizarding world, and I do like Lin.  By now, I expected to know what the title has to do with the story - have I missed something?

I like your story very much, looking forward to updates. Interesting person this Lin and Severus Snape is always an interesting man to follow

interesting story, now to the next chapter

This is getting more and more intriguing. Keep up your fine work!

I really like this story and will look for updates.  I like mysteries involving Snape and so far your Lin seems like a character I will enjoy.  Keep it coming!

Very good.

This is quite interesting. I am going to keep reading because I just love mysteries.

very interesting reading. Like this very much.

Lovely. Just the right combination of intrigue and hints of past mysteries.

That's a seemingly inauspicious beginning with Snape, but she actually had a good conversation with him.

This is an intriguing start to something.  I think it hasn't gotten reviews yet because it doesn't really feel like it's gotten going yet.  As the set up to a mystery story, I think it does just what it's supposed to do.  I hope the next chapter comes soon!

That's an interesting pair. I'm really looking forward to the rest.

The text for this chapter is identical to Chapter Two, so I can't review it. I also can't continue reading.  Judging from other reviews, this chapter was overwritten at some point.

Biggest problem with this chapter is that it's a lot of infodump and not much happening.  While it's good to provide the background on Lin, there's better ways to do it.

That said, I'm still reading.

I like mysteries, so this caught my eye. It's interesting. However, there's a couple things I'd like to mention.

Wisard in a grey suit? I could believe grey robes, but not a suit.

Your Aurors appear to be rather unprofessional. I found their focus on personal gain to be rather jarring, given that they were supposed to be investigating a murder.

Is English your native language? I'm getting what I call "earclank" - sentences and phrases that jolt me right out of the story. Examples: "upon surgery", "stretched out like a soldier".

Nice start. I'm a big fan of detective stories.

It's good to get some information filled in.  Janet's one description of the perfect wizard sounded a lot like Gilderoy Lockhart.