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Love Denied

sunny33

22 Reviews   |   22 Ratings, 0 Likes, 14 Favorites )

Angst Drabble/100-Word Saturday Night Drabbles 875 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Hermione has married under the new Marriage Law and is not happy.

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sunny33

Member Since 2008  |  129 Stories  |  Favorited by 689  |  8,383 Reviews Written  |  8,235 Review Responses

Hello all,  I am a 53 year old from NZ.  Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing.  Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)

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10/10

debjunk

Augh, sunny, this is terrible!  Somehow I knew she'd come to such a decision, but hoped for a better end.  And how incredibly tragic that he loved her but could never tell her.  *Sniff* 

Response from sunny33 (Author of Love Denied)

*passes out kleenex*  I'm blaming the prompt. ;)

10/10

peppermint

Oh, how deftly written and horribly sad :(

Response from sunny33 (Author of Love Denied)

Thanks, minty! :)

0/10

tenoh27

So sad... thanks, anyway. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Love Denied)

Thank you for reviewing. :)

10/10

moiramountain

Slytherins..... that damned pride of theirs always costs them so much.  One would think Lucius might have learned at least something from the tragedy of Severus Snape....

Response from sunny33 (Author of Love Denied)

Yes, one would think that. Thanks for reviewing. :)

10/10

blue artemis

Holy crap.  That actually made me tear up. Beautifully done.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Love Denied)

*bows*  My job is done! :)

0/10

quaffswinegaily

So sad!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Love Denied)

Yes. No winners here. :)

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh how sad. I was totally shocked that Hermione had come to love Lucius even though he was so cold toward her.  It's sad that he never let his guard down long enough to tell her how he felt. Quite a sad story.  Money and opulance are not happiness. Love is.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Love Denied)

You've got it! :)

10/10

Sirius Girl 08

Sunny, this was so powerful for being so short.  Great job on getting across the emotions, and such a sad twist in the ending.  Beautiful job and brilliant response to the prompt xXx

Response from sunny33 (Author of Love Denied)

Thanks! :)

0/10

sara lady dalian

Oh my.  This was well done.  Almost creepy.  Without extreme details you can see their position and understand each dilemma.  Congrats!  Sara

Response from sunny33 (Author of Love Denied)

Thank you, Sara. :)

10/10

snitchette

What lack of communication can bring is sometimes terrible. Feeling dark today?

Response from sunny33 (Author of Love Denied)

No, just doing what the prompt told me to. I'm very obedient, you know! :)

10/10

Pennfana

Very sad.  Well done.(Gee, that was eloquent!  I just couldn't think of anything else to say.)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Love Denied)

LOL.  Thanks, Penn. :)

10/10

Mazzy

Goodness!! The dark drabbles flowed last night and I'm left with a plethora of delicious 'darks' to read and enjoy this morning. That was excellent! I love that they both actually cared for each other. It twists the knife just that much deeper. lol

Response from sunny33 (Author of Love Denied)

Indeed it does. :)

10/10

karelia

*sighs heavily*I see some really good writing here, but the plot *cries*

Response from sunny33 (Author of Love Denied)

Poor Lucius.  Should have said something, shouldn't he? :)

10/10

Twilexis

Thats it, i am never writing an angst prompt again. this was beautiful and sad

Response from sunny33 (Author of Love Denied)

I'm sending the Kleenex bill to you! :P

Response from Twilexis (Reviewer)

oh i dont think so! YOU wrote it! I just provided the ammo! lol

0/10

Starshadow

Oh, very well done!  How sad for them both - and yet I suspect many such scenes are played out in relationships every day; though not always with suicide involved.I think I have to go read more of your stories now. Am hooked!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Love Denied)

Thank you,

Response from sunny33 (Author of Love Denied)

.  :)

10/10

KellyH

Oh, angst. How I love thee.

This had me from the very first sentence and now has become one of the top favourites of your stories. Carry on the great work!!! XD

Response from sunny33 (Author of Love Denied)

LOL.  Should have known you'd like it, Kel! :)

10/10

HBAR

Oh, how sad.  But, an enjoyable read.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Love Denied)

Thanks! :)

10/10

nge

god that was awesome! such love. such sorrow.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Love Denied)

Thank you. :)

10/10

Marty21

So sad, if only Lucius hadn't been so stubborn and just let his guard down long enough to let Hermoine know how he felt.  *Sniffs, reaches for a box of tissues*  Well done Sunny

Response from sunny33 (Author of Love Denied)

Thank you, Marty. :)

0/10

kimjo2

oh my.  how painful and sad.  thanks

Response from sunny33 (Author of Love Denied)

Thank you. :)

0/10

elsolel

The word "idiot" comes to mind.  Lucius was so stupid.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Love Denied)

Sure was. :)

0/10

Aling

This was very well-written and really captured their emotions. I wasn't expecting Lucius to return her affections, so good job with the gut punch!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Love Denied)

Thank you! :)

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