Nary a Word Said
sara lady dalian11 Reviews | 10.0/10 (11 Ratings, 0 Likes, 3 Favorites )
Every day I look into the mirror and wait for it to talk back to me, but it, too, is giving me the silent treatment since you left.
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I'm not sure who left who. Probably Hermione left after a countless cheating. It's sad but I think he never deserved her in the first place.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Nary a Word Said)
In my head it was Hermione who left and Ron who was left without a string to bind him. I had thought to make the other person Severus, but I just couldn't do that to him after everything else that she goes through. Thanks for the review - Sara
Awww. Go after her silly and say you're sorry. Beg. Don't hole up and drink! Very sad piece, quite depressing, but well done.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Nary a Word Said)
You have to wonder how many times he has gone after her, said he was sorry and begged. I don't think it would make any difference this time and he knows it. Thanks for the review. Sara
Very powerful. Bravo!
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Nary a Word Said)
Thank you! Christmas truffles to you. Sara
Very cool, sara! :)
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Nary a Word Said)
Thank you! Christmas truffles to you. Sara
Sad.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Nary a Word Said)
Thank you! Christmas truffles to you. Sara
This is haunting. Lovely.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Nary a Word Said)
There is something haunting about someone so bereft. Thank you! Christmas truffles to you. Sara
This was really, really poignant! Well done! *applauds*
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Nary a Word Said)
*Blushes and skips off... "She liked it! The Great One liked it!" Thank you! Christmas truffles to you. Sara
This is beautiful, sara. Well, depressing, but beautiful.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Nary a Word Said)
Thank you! Christmas truffles to you. Sara
Beautiful, my dear! Simple and lovely.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Nary a Word Said)
It's much better for your thoughts and help. Thank you! Christmas truffles to you. Sara
Awwww... Love it!
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Nary a Word Said)
I am sorry I couldn't manage this in dialogue. I tried but it just didn't work out. I got the image of extreme dejection when I read your prompt. Thank you! Christmas truffles to you. Sara
Response from Twilexis (Reviewer)
It's okay, it worked out perfectly! I'm not too fussy when it comes to prompts I write, I just love reading new work! 10 thumbs up!
Very sad.