Perfection
karelia16 Reviews | 8.13/10 (16 Ratings, 0 Likes, 8 Favorites )
Hermione ponders her feelings about Severus.
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Dabbling in writing, in music, enjoying knitting on reasonably cool days. Petulant admin. Beta for some. Alpha for some. Cheese-maker for many. Locavore with a passion.
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*sigh* Very simply, beautiful.Beth
Response from karelia (Author of Perfection)
Aw, thank you, Beth!
wow perfection! likez it very much that is what i call tender
Response from karelia (Author of Perfection)
Thank you! <3
it is so diferent when you're with someone who loves you. thanks
Response from karelia (Author of Perfection)
You absolutely nailed it! So very true!Thank you for the review!
Beautifully written....now where can I find someone like that
Response from karelia (Author of Perfection)
By creating. :DThank you for your kind words.
*stunned* I love it. I'm now a believer - oh I was already a firm believer that you can write anything and knock my socks off - but I'm now a believer that writing the writing without nouns works. I'm amazed. AV
Response from karelia (Author of Perfection)
*blushes*You are too kind, my dear AV!I find these little challenges to write without a noun, adjective, comma, a particular word, etc. very stimulating. :D
Awww. very nice! Aptly titled story. :)
Response from karelia (Author of Perfection)
:) Thank you!
This is sweet. I could so see him as patient, considerate and intuitive.
Response from karelia (Author of Perfection)
Thank you.
Wow, that is amazing. I didn't miss those nouns at all.
Response from karelia (Author of Perfection)
*grins* Actually, writing without common nouns was much easier for me than writing without adjectives. LOL
Lovely, as always! Thanks :)
Response from karelia (Author of Perfection)
Thank you for your kind words! :D
As ever it's very lovely. I like to think Severus doesn't show his tender side to many people. But when he does... *dreamy sigh*
Response from karelia (Author of Perfection)
I agree. I think he'd have to feel very comfortable around someone before he shows that side of him...Thanks, as ever, for your lovely review!
Anonymous
Who gives these prompts?
Author's Response: People in the chatroom. ;)
Thanks for reviewing.
Mmm, that last line just got me!
Response from karelia (Author of Perfection)
*grins* Thanks, hon!