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At Last

sunny33

20 Reviews | 7.35/10 (20 Ratings, 0 Likes, 5 Favorites )

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Hermione's thoughts as she and Severus make love for the first time.

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sunny33

Member Since 2008 | 129 Stories | Favorited by 689 | 8,383 Reviews Written | 8,235 Review Responses

Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)

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10/10

mick42

All I can say is, ''bless me''.

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10/10

HBAR

Wow, that's a tough challenge. And so well done, I might add. I wanted to be obnoxious and leave a review with only nouns, but something like, "cat tree bicycles" didn't seem like quite enough praise for this piece. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of At Last)

LOL worth a try. Ok, ok, I'm going tp write now! Slavedriver! :P

8/10

severuslover

Good job! Very nice.~Jen

Response from sunny33 (Author of At Last)

Thanks, Jen. :)

0/10

kimjo2

*sigh* lovely. thanks and smoochies

Response from sunny33 (Author of At Last)

Thanks! :)

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beaweasley2

Aww Yeah!

Response from sunny33 (Author of At Last)

LOL. Thanks, bea! :)

10/10

sevibaby

This was wonderful.

Response from sunny33 (Author of At Last)

Thanks! :)

10/10

WriterMerrin

I really love this, the emotion without all of the encumberances. So very beautiful.

Response from sunny33 (Author of At Last)

Thank you, Merrin. :)

10/10

blue artemis

Well done!

Response from sunny33 (Author of At Last)

Thanks! :)

10/10

Anonymous

Ack, I just ate.

Author's Response: Told you too much junk food would make you sick. :P

KingPhilipsWench's response: You never said that. You said it would make SEVERUS sick. Besides, I had lamb.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

It's very beautiful and must have been a hard exercise. I see one noun though. :) Your word choice is still wonderful.

Response from sunny33 (Author of At Last)

Oops, which one? LITC did allow 'longing' as a gerund, and pronouns, names etc. Thanks for the review, Sun.:)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Reviewer)

It is longing. It's a noun in the way you used it. :) You're welcome. It's a tough challenge.

Response from sunny33 (Author of At Last)

Oh well. Close. We were trying to target the use of body parts (especially certain body parts) and physical things, but still. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Reviewer)

Oh, I didn't realize. I just saw the no nouns allowed. :)

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