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Birthright
sevibaby24 Reviews | 4.75/10 (24 Ratings, 0 Likes, 33 Favorites )
Hermione receives a letter from Severus Snape that change her past, present and future.
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I am huge severus snape and hermione granger shipper. I live in the hottest place on earth, Arizona. I have two daughers who are huge harry potter fans. I have been married for almost 10 years and love to write.
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K got really excited then boom no more:( when is more gonna be up?
Response from sevibaby (Author of Birthright)
I am in the process of ch. 3. I had it going one way and boom it is going in a different direction. But it is working a whole lot better. So hopefully the wait won't be to long.
The emotions are racing about with this fic.I just hope there isn't too much of the RW/HG relationship. *shudders* I personally don't see them together.
Response from sevibaby (Author of Birthright)
I will be mostly concentrating on the journals. But please just remember I am keeping this cannon compliant so there will be a little RW/HG. I am mostly a big fan of SS/HG and and all of my other stories are of the couple. As far as the emotions, it's going to be a roller coaster ride. Enjoy and thanks for the feed back.
Good, but I cannot imagine Snape writing comments like "note to self" or actually writing in a journal and addressing it as if it were a person. That makes it less realistic and a bit juvenile.
I am normally a huge fan of SS/HG stories with them as a couple, but this story is very intriguing and I can't wait for the next update
Response from sevibaby (Author of Birthright)
Thank you. I also love the SS/HG stories with them as a couple but there are so few out there with this type of relationship and the idea hit me and the muse ran with it.
oops this ought to have been a signed review. cheers!
Response from sevibaby (Author of Birthright)
Okay and cheers back.
*sniff* I never cry, but I feel myself getting weepy by the end of this chapter. He's so reluctant to love her, yet he keeps finding so much of himself in her that he can't help becoming attached. I suspect that by the end of the story he will be helping Hermione more than Lily's Harry, or rather, helping Harry because it's what Hermione wants and needs.
Response from sevibaby (Author of Birthright)
Thank you. I have most of the story maped out and the hardest chapter will be for year 7. Plan to have a box full of kleenex. Just a hint there.
This is a great premise. I hope you explain why she's so reluctant to believe it as you go. Oh, and yay Ron! He's usually supportive of Harry; it makes sense that he would be just as supportive of Hermione.
Response from sevibaby (Author of Birthright)
Just wait, it will get better.
I am totally hooked by Severus journals, such brilliant writing, I am totally impressed by your skills, I can't wait to read more. As an allergic to Hermione and Ron as a couple I prefer to close my eyes to that part of the story:-) I can like him as a friend, but not as a romantic interest, not to mention how ill-suited I find them to be. I think Rupert Grint who plays Ronny in the movies does a fantastic job though, I like "movie-Ron" far better than "book-Ron". But, I digress, I am completly able to close my eyes for all Hermione/Ron action you write and enjoy the rest of the story, as I said, Severus Journals are a brilliant piece of work!!!
Response from sevibaby (Author of Birthright)
Thank you and you will get a more insightful look into Severus's mind, and I love Severus and Hermione together, but for this story I am keeping it canon.
I like the journal entries, very subtle and realistic. Looking forward to finding out who's joined her by the tree! (Well wrth the wait.) :)
Response from sevibaby (Author of Birthright)
Thank you and as far as who joins her, well that's a surprise.
Response from Jinxie (Reviewer)
Ooh, is he not really dead then? :)
Who?? Okay, I am going to follow this. I will patiently wait for you to update.Thank you again, for sharing~
Response from sevibaby (Author of Birthright)
Response from sevibaby (Author of Birthright)
Thank you. Updates will hopefully come a little faster but RL has just sent me a curve ball. But I do have the entire story maped out and I know where it is going. Enjoy.
Very intriguing. I will follow on.Thank you for sharing~
Response from sevibaby (Author of Birthright)
Response from sevibaby (Author of Birthright)
Thank you. I hope you will enjoy future chapters.
Awesome premise. :)
Response from sevibaby (Author of Birthright)
I never responded to this. OMG. Thanks for everything luv.
So has his portrait shown up yet? Neat story.
Response from sevibaby (Author of Birthright)
I am not going to say. I am trying to keep this as canon as possible.
Oh, I'm so excited! While I absolutely love SS/HG stories, I also enjoy the few I find where he's secretly related to her as well. I can't wait to see what she finds in the journals, as well as Harry's reaction when she finally feels comfortable telling him. Ron's support is just brilliant, and I know this is going to be a wonderful read. I'm going to put this on my Favorites list right now, and wait for chapter two!
Response from sevibaby (Author of Birthright)
Thank you. I am working on chapter 2 right now and hope to udate regularly. I also love SS/HG.
Great start! You've got me hooked and I'm anxiously awaiting more.
Response from sevibaby (Author of Birthright)
Thank you. The muse ran away for a little while during the writing of chapter 2 but I was able to find him, tie him down and got to work.
Anonymous
Intriguing premise. Looking forward to the journals and how Hermione handles it.
Author's Response:
Thank you. The journals will be the windows to Snape's soul.
This is definitely not your average SSHG story, and I can't wait to see what Hermione learns in those journals.
Great beginning!
Response from sevibaby (Author of Birthright)
I wanted something different, and had read just a few where Snape was her father. This idea appealed to me and I ran with it.
Anonymous
Interesting beginning. Not that I believe Snape is dead, of course.
Author's Response: I know, I want him to be alive also. But unfortunatly we didn't write the ending for DH, JK did.
KingPhilipsWench's response: Wow.
I'm really like this story so far, I can't wait to see what she finds in those journals. Excellent job.
Response from sevibaby (Author of Birthright)
Thank you. The journals will be very enlighting.
Quite an interesting story that sounds very promising. Can't wait to read more!
Response from sevibaby (Author of Birthright)
Thank you. Chapter 2 is being written right now.
Interesting beginning! I eagerly await the rest of your story. Sara
Response from sevibaby (Author of Birthright)
Thank you. I will try to update on a regular basis.
very interisting start. what a shame he did not tell her when alive, but I would have been to dangerous. looking forward to updates
Response from sevibaby (Author of Birthright)
Thank you. The updates will reveal what he truly felt at the end.
Update soon please!
Response from sevibaby (Author of Birthright)
Tell your sister to leave alone then. I am 3/4 of the way done with the second chapter.
Great story! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Response from sevibaby (Author of Birthright)
Thank you. I am in the process of writing the second chapter.