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Short Story Coldness
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Coldness

Juli_Min

4 Reviews   |   4 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Angst Short Story 366 Words 1 Chapter Complete

You should be careful when you take someone home with you.

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Chapter 1: Coldness


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Juli_Min

Member Since 2005  |  11 Stories  |  Favorited by 7  |  21 Reviews Written  |  89 Review Responses

I was born in Berlin (Germany) on the 10th of January. I'm happily married to an American. My greatest passions are writing, reading and drawing pictures. I spend a lot of time on the computer (especially in winter) because I want to know everything and the internet is the best way to sate my hunger. I became addicted to Harry Potter when reading it to my young cousins.

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EverMystique

Hmmm... very interesting and intriguing.

10/10

Firewhisky

I know this is an original, but i was thinking of narcissa malfoy when you mentioned the woman being so pale and cold. i had the thought that she goes home with some muggle guy off the street but her husband finds her and kills her... leaving the muggle guy with a mess and a mindfuck (obliviate maybe?).  Or like SW69 said, the guy might have hallucinated the whole thing.  bad for him, but entertaining for me! ;)

Response from Juli_Min (Author of Coldness)

I like your interpretation. A well-placed Obliviate would explain it quite nicely... drugs would as well, I guess.Anyway, I'm glad you like it.

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Mrs_D_Radcliffe

Woah, freaky but amazing. How did you do that??? Omg, like what made you think of that. Oh god I'm gonna be wondering about that for yonks now. Definitely not the woman he took home. Fabby work!! x

Response from Juli_Min (Author of Coldness)

No, she was't. It's a twisted little story, that just popped up in my head one night. It was such a disturbing plot that I needed to write it down imediately. I'm glad you like it.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Wow! It made me think that he was the one that did something wrong. I wondered if he'd murdered someone whilst in another state of mind, some type of schizo problem or something with hallucinations.That was my first impression. Either way, she was definitely not who he'd brought home. Good work.  

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