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House Help
snapesbeatrice7 Reviews | 7 Ratings, 0 Likes, 4 Favorites )
Battered by Tobias, Eileen Snape receives unwanted help at home--and her son comes to visit.
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Anonymous
That. Was. Awesome. Excellent story. I really feel that it accurately depicted a young DE Snape. Well done.
Author's Response: Squee! So glad you liked it and that this Snape felt right. Thanks so much for taking the time to review!
Well, that was a surprise.But nevertheless a surprise that was well written. The end fits - even if it is a little creepy. Well done!
Response from snapesbeatrice (Author of House Help)
It just seemed an appropriately Slytherin scheme. Severus barely had to lift a wand, and his Dark Lord would so enjoy how he worked out both problems.I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks very much for reviewing!
That wasn't at all what I expected. I hope he learns to regret it.
Response from snapesbeatrice (Author of House Help)
I'm glad that the ending was unforeseen. It just seemed like the "right" thing to do, in this case. Since it took Lily's endangerment and death to shake him to his senses, it makes one wonder just what he did as a Death Eater before then.Thanks for reading and reviewing! I do appreciate it.
This is very different. I like the idea of an Eileen and Tobias who survive to Snape's adulthood. I'm eager to see the conversation that will no doubt come next.
Response from snapesbeatrice (Author of House Help)
I'm sure that Severus will be a perfect gentleman. Cross my heart and hope to--erm, maybe not. "grins evilly" There will be one more chapter.
Anonymous
Very interesting story. Looking forward to the rest.
Author's Response: Thank you. Only one more chapter, coming very soon!
Wow. Interesting start. Your descriptions are beautifully written and create a lot of atmosphere.I'm looking forward to more of this.
Response from snapesbeatrice (Author of House Help)
Thank you very much! I'm glad you're enjoying it.Am hoping to work out the punctuation/grammar bugs from the second (and last) chapter tonight and submit it for validation. So maybe it will be up by week's end.
Oh gods, poor Audrey! Still, a sad but riviting story.
Response from snapesbeatrice (Author of House Help)
That story was one of those "Where did that come from?!" experiences. Audrey became a useful tool for Snape to get rid of his Muggle problem and enhance his DE credibility.Thanks for reading and reviewing, BW2!