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Devotion
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HP will always be my original fandom, but these days you'll often find me trundling about in manga/anime fandoms. No OTPs (or OT3s), and gen is always nice.
I’ve hopscotched my way across the States and currently live someplace cold. Very cold. With wind. I keep telling myself it's a character building experience.
Proud parent of an adorable house rabbit and two clingy cats. Mostly a beta, occasionally an author. You can find me at slytherinlaurel.livejournal.com and slytherinlaurel.tumblr.com. Stop by and say hi!
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very realistic. *shudder*a grand impression of his regiment!yes, no dignity, no forgiveness, no weakness no nothing.pure power or nothing.
Response from slytherinlaurel (Author of Devotion)
To me Voldemort exudes corrupt power and unilateral ruthlessness. I'm glad that came through! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Brr! That's very creepy. i could almost hear Voldy's laugh (cackles in fact) while he watches Bella's writhing form on the cold floor.
Response from slytherinlaurel (Author of Devotion)
Thank you! I really tried to turn up the creep factor on this one!
Creepy and disturbing. Very well done!
Response from slytherinlaurel (Author of Devotion)
Thank you! I'm glad the creep factor came through!
Oh, poor Bella!
Response from slytherinlaurel (Author of Devotion)
Kind of picked the wrong pony, didn't she? Thanks for reviewing!
So creepy! Well done!
Response from slytherinlaurel (Author of Devotion)
Thank you! So glad it was adequately creepifying!
Wonder if she thought she had done the right thing afterwords? *smug grin... Sara
Response from slytherinlaurel (Author of Devotion)
Ah, 20/20 hindsight. I bet a lot of her life falls into that category!Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Oh man, why on earth -- how on earth did Voldemort have followers if he was this horrible to them? I'd so hate to be in Bella's boots (or lack of) in this chapter! Eerie!
Response from slytherinlaurel (Author of Devotion)
Ah, the wonders of meglomaniacs and social conditioning. I'm glad I'm not in her boots either.Thanks!!
Chilly, creepy. Perfect!
Response from slytherinlaurel (Author of Devotion)
Thank you so much!! It creeped me out a little, too...
Oh, well done! Bella's devotion is almost as creepy as his response. Perfect tone. Quite chilling.
Response from slytherinlaurel (Author of Devotion)
Thank you! I'm so glad it gave you the creeps! *cackles*