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The Cave

Shadow

13 Reviews | 6.85/10 (13 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Horror Hogwarts Castle 1,960 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Harry Potter Hermione Granger Ronald Weasley

Deep underground, Ron Weasley discovers something that utterly terrifies him.

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Member Since 2007 | 5 Stories | Favorited by 17 | 886 Reviews Written | 198 Review Responses

I am 26 years old, recently married. I absolutely adore the world of Harry Potter, and love fanfics. My favourite pairing is SS/HG.
My husband doesn't understand it, but he accepts it (grudgingly!)

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10/10

Great! Very creepy, just as I like. The story reminded me of "The Sun Dog" by Stephen King. There was the same situation with the photo - the dog on the photo was getting closer and closer

10/10

IWannaBeASlytherin

Awesome job. My daughter came up behind me as I was reading and tapped me on the back, I jumped like two feet in the air. Really scary. I wonder what it was though?

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Very creepy. You've done such a great job!

Response from Shadow (Author of The Cave)

Thanks so much. Thanks for the pretty stars!

9/10

Leave it to Ron curiosity to get him in trouble.

Response from Shadow (Author of The Cave)

Yip, typical Ron. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

10/10

Wow... that was so creepy how the eyes kept getting bigger and bigger! Spooky!

Response from Shadow (Author of The Cave)

I'm glad you unjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing and for the stars!

10/10

HermioneWeasley1972

Freaky!!!!!!!!!!!!! What was it? I want to know!

Response from Shadow (Author of The Cave)

Thanks! I don't actually know either. I wanted to leave it completely to the reader's imagination.

10/10

Now THAT was one very creepy read! I'm guessing maybe the inhabitant of that cave was something like Aragog... I remember that the young Ron's boggart was an Acromantula, so it's possible that an up-close-and-personal solo encounter of the many-legged kind could have pushed him over the edge.Then again, maybe the cave-dweller was something even worse...Well done!

Response from Shadow (Author of The Cave)

I'm not actually sure what it is either. I wanted to let the reader use their imagination, but yes. It is something a lot worse...

10/10

Oh my gods! What was in the cave? It's so weird that the eyes kept growing larger, as if the whatever-it-is was coming for him. Develishly scary, heart thumping writing!

Response from Shadow (Author of The Cave)

Thanks. I was actually sweating as I wrote this, so I am glad it inspired some of the same feelings. I'm still not really sure what is in the cave. Something really evil tho.

0/10

sara lady dalian

Oh My God! *shudders... spooky...

Response from Shadow (Author of The Cave)

Thanks. Glad you liked it.

0/10

Rose of the West

My guess is an acromantula. Spiders have always scared the bejeebers out of Ron. Quite chilling!

Response from Shadow (Author of The Cave)

Thanks. I don't actually know what it is precicely, but it is something quite evil.

0/10

Stella Stargazer

This was a nerve-wracking read. It wasn't the red eyes (or whatever demon possessed them) that frightened me the most; it was your vivid description of the cave itself. This was difficult to get through for someone as claustrophobic as I am. I guess you could consider yourself a very successful storyteller that I perservered to the end. Great job!

Response from Shadow (Author of The Cave)

Thank you for such a compliment. I am glad I could keep you interested enough to finish.

10/10

Scary.I really wonder what monster lives in that cave.Poor Ron.

Response from Shadow (Author of The Cave)

Poor Ron indeed. It is something truly evil in that cave.

0/10

Creepy! I'm not sleeping tonight. Thanks for the spook!

Response from Shadow (Author of The Cave)

Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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