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GrangerSnape100 Not Quite the Alleged Inferno
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Not Quite the Alleged Inferno

karelia

17 Reviews   |   17 Ratings, 0 Likes, 14 Favorites )

Romance Drabble/100-Word GrangerSnape100 1,118 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

He thought he'd arrived in the lowest depths of hell but eventually realised that wasn't quite the case.

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Chapter 1: Not Quite the Alleged Inferno


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kimjo2

splendid! thanks and smoochies

Response from karelia (Author of Not Quite the Alleged Inferno)

Thank you!

10/10

aura

It's seems very Severus for him to have to talk himself up from deserving to be in the worst parts of hell to having a chance at life and even heaven.Very nice.

Response from karelia (Author of Not Quite the Alleged Inferno)

Thank you! Yes, I'd imagine him like that, lol :D

10/10

Stefdarlin

Oh, I love this!  It was poetic beauty that he went through all those levels to end up on the one that counted. =o)  Yay!!

Response from karelia (Author of Not Quite the Alleged Inferno)

Thank you! *glomps*

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Bentwaters

So quick and smart. Loved it all.

Response from karelia (Author of Not Quite the Alleged Inferno)

Thank you. So glad you liked it!

10/10

Anonymous

Great work! The "counting down" of the levels gives a nice dynamic to it.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it!

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salvamea

there was someone reading his Dante?So Snape found his Beatrice to lead him to heaven! *bravado*you've described his sort of agony and the reliving the bad deeds, good deeds very good!always a step less infernal.I definitely do prefere it that way round for him.And he was the only Death Eater that could produce a Patronus? I never thought of that.logical indeed. Always something new to learn in this universe of potter verse.

Response from karelia (Author of Not Quite the Alleged Inferno)

Thank you for a lovely and thoughtful review!I tend to look at possible resolutions from various angle and then take the one that appeals most. Being a generally happy person, I prefer happy endings, of course, so going backwards from the lowest level was the logical thing for me to do, lol.I think it is safe to imply that he was the only DE capable of casting a Patronus. Canon shows only him to do it, and if I remember correctly, JKR even said as much in an interview a few years ago.

10/10

fizzabella

Lovely:) Just lovely:) Severus is very believable and so is Hermione:)Brava!

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Response from karelia (Author of Not Quite the Alleged Inferno)

Thank you muchly! :D

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gersknightlady

I liked that very much and I usually dont like short things.  Well written good work. :)

Response from karelia (Author of Not Quite the Alleged Inferno)

Thank you!

10/10

sregner

Oh that was so wonderful!  Thank you

Response from karelia (Author of Not Quite the Alleged Inferno)

I'm glad you liked it!

10/10

snitchette

I’ve arrived in Heaven.I think I did too with this lovely story.

Response from karelia (Author of Not Quite the Alleged Inferno)

Aw, thank you for such kind words!

10/10

neelix

ahhh... heaven indeed! Just perfect! Thanks for sharing this!

Response from karelia (Author of Not Quite the Alleged Inferno)

:D Thank you!

10/10

Anonymous

Nice inter-pre-tation of the prompt. 

 

Author's Response: You left a review? *faints*

Thank you!

10/10

OpalJade

Brilliant!!! You know, when I first saw the prompt for GS100 this week  I thought it was too "complicated" to be well written in a drabble format...You've proved me wrong!!!! This was witty, amusing and poignant all at the same time. I loved how Snape's insights reflected his personality perfectly.So well done!  

Response from karelia (Author of Not Quite the Alleged Inferno)

Thank you so much!I admit that when I saw the prompt, I drew a complete blank for just a hundred words, but then it kind of started percolating throughout the afternoon, and I ended up writing this one. :D

10/10

makaem

I really liked that, and drabbles usually aren't my thing.

Response from karelia (Author of Not Quite the Alleged Inferno)

I'm glad you read it, even though you don't usually read drabbles! Thank you!

10/10

Marty21

What a great way to start my morning then to read a lovely drabble where Severus lives.

Response from karelia (Author of Not Quite the Alleged Inferno)

Thank you! I'm happy you liked it!

10/10

sunny33

That was clever! :)

Response from karelia (Author of Not Quite the Alleged Inferno)

Glad you think so! :D

10/10

luvsev

Aww. You've done our Severus justice by such a splendid drabble!

Response from karelia (Author of Not Quite the Alleged Inferno)

Thank you, dear

Response from karelia (Author of Not Quite the Alleged Inferno)

! ::squish::

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