Jardin des Plantes
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A young witch sees something in the garden.
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thank you for this trip to Paris.Though it feels very triste. but that must be so, when hunted by a ghost, if I understand correctly?and the weather as well suits for a sad story.very cool. so the witches get their magical plants dans le jardin du plantes. you are cool.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Jardin des Plantes)
Yes, the story is very sad. And just how much of a ghost she had seen is left up to us. Just how dead do you have to be to be classified as a ghost? Thank you for reviewing and have a lovely day! Sara
This such a lovely description of the gardens that it makes me want to go visit them again (it's been a long time). But the end is also very sad. I wish she could find a way to reach him and deliver him from his melancholy.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Jardin des Plantes)
I have always thought Paris had some of the most lovely gardens in the world. Unfortunately, I've never had the time to play in them. The ending is sad - but sometimes things just have to be sad.
Sounds fabulous! :)
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Jardin des Plantes)
Paris always sounds fabulous to me. Thanks!
Very evocative - is it Severus in the flesh, or perhaps in ghostly form come to fulfill some unfinished promise? More please...... ??
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Jardin des Plantes)
Whether or not is really is him is the bite. I don't know if I will continue this or leave it as it is. It was born from a prompt that played into a story I've had sketched for some time but no real time or the muse to write. Thanks for the review. Sara
Lovely. Would like to read more.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Jardin des Plantes)
Thanks Deb. I don't know. The ending is growing on me. Ashwinder made me specify that the man and woman were Hermione and Severus, but I think I like this just the way it is here best. *shrug... we'll see.