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Wicked Intentions
silverdoe10 Reviews | 5.8/10 (10 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
Ron's life has not turned out the way he had envisioned. He plans to change that.
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Hmmm. Ron is very good at blaming everyone else when things don't go his way. If he didn't insist on dating shallow women who only want him for his war hero status, he probably could have met someone who would be quite happy with him as he is.
how does the rest of the story go?
I have a hard time with both Snape and Harry turning gay as well; one or the other, but both seems a bit off, since both were last seen in canon with their hearts lost to people of the female variety. But Ron is very good at blaming everyone but himself, and that's certainly true to canon!
I feel sorry for Ron, but really, didhe honestly think that Hermione would be happy as a housewitch and mother of seven? Even he's not that thick. And Harry and Severus a couple - that's interesting. Nope, Ron's gonna fall flat on his face again. Too bad, Severus might have found him a cure if he wasn't such a berk.
I'm looking forward to reading this story when it's done!
Evil!Ron, huh?
Well, your Ron has begun to loose sympathies as soon as he so willingly replaced Hermione with any willing woman in his plans.
That he sided with his sister after her breakup with Harry was understandable, but ...
Dear author, you truly managed to build up a unlikeable character, which I think was your intention.
The only think that doesn't sit right with me so far, is Snape leaving Hermione for Harry. That part seems slightly constructed.
Hmm, I was starting to feel truly sorry for Ron towards the middle of this, but that quickly went out the window with his scheming.
Okay, so two seemingly straight men who are in long term relationships, one married with a kid, decide to turn gay. That just doesn't jibe with me. One of them, maybe, but this just seems a bit too contrived.
I see Ron is putting that strategic brain of his to use. :)
Interesting start, I'm curious to see how this plays out in future chapters.
Interesting start. A very dark Ron. I'll keep reading to see where you take this.
One critical note: In the last sentence, I believe the word you should have used is "conscience" rather than "conscious", unless you were going for a different meaning that I got from the sentence.