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Breaking up

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Breaking up

karelia

12 Reviews   |   12 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )

Drabble/100-Word GrangerSnape100 125 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Harry Potter Hermione Granger Ronald Weasley Severus Snape

Harry is curious

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Dabbling in writing, in music, enjoying knitting on reasonably cool days. Petulant admin. Beta for some. Alpha for some. Cheese-maker for many. Locavore with a passion.

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0/10

Fishy

Awwwww! Poor Ron! I'm impressed he was man enough to admit the truth, say it out right. I don't often feel sorry for Ron, but I do here. Good job - conveyed a lot with just a few words!

10/10

MakalaniAstral

still chuckling.  that was good.  could see the actors actually playing it out on screen.

Response from karelia (Author of Breaking up)

I wish they would! LOL!

10/10

makaem

Nice.

Response from karelia (Author of Breaking up)

Thank you!

0/10

AliRose409

Got to feel sorry for Ron...oh who am I kidding!! I guess his emotional range must have increased to the size of a tablespoon for Hermione to be so polite. She was probably thinking 'You are a complete oaf, Ronald Weasley!!" lol

Response from karelia (Author of Breaking up)

Heh, so very true! *snickers at size of emotional range*Thanks! :D

10/10

Anonymous

Uh, this must have been hard to bear for Ron...

Author's Response: i think his pride was hurt. *nods*

Danke!

10/10

oohdear

short sweet and to the point!women can be so cruel!loved it

Response from karelia (Author of Breaking up)

*ponders*If she'd been really cruel, she'd have called him an oaf or something, I'm sure...*blows kiss*

Response from oohdear (Reviewer)

just a polite way of saying that he was an oaf!see that is the difference between women and men. When women want to break up, it is mostly nicely, oh things did not work out, but can we still be friends? men will probably say, oh things did not work out, can we still have sex?ha ha

10/10

sunny33

Poor Ron.  Destined to be hopelessly oafish for all his days! :)

Response from karelia (Author of Breaking up)

Perhaps not exactly oafish, but he'll never acquire the elegance that Severus has... *grins*

10/10

snitchette

It seems he took it rather well. Has he finally grown up during his time with her? *smirk*

Response from karelia (Author of Breaking up)

I think he learned a little bit from her over time, lol.Thanks,

Response from karelia (Author of Breaking up)

! *pats the shinies*

10/10

debjunk

Yay, Hermione!  You figured it out. 

Response from karelia (Author of Breaking up)

*grins*As she always does!

0/10

morgaine_dulac

Naw, poor Ron.

Response from karelia (Author of Breaking up)

Uhuh. I feel sorry for him at times, too.

10/10

Crystal Quill

Sounds believable... Even though Severus is so much older than her.

Response from karelia (Author of Breaking up)

Hm. 20 years isn't that much of a difference. That's even found in our world, and what with wizards and witches having a longer life span, it looks even less.Thank you for reviewing!

9/10

poopotter

'Severus is a gentleman,Ron. You are not. Nor will you ever be.'   Ouchhhhhhh..that hurt him badly.....probably he deserved it..we all know how he is...rite....but really great...I am proud of Hermione.....and of u...this is wonderful...keep up the good work.......and Disclaimer: sorry for borrowing ur words...no money made by them..heheheh...

Response from karelia (Author of Breaking up)

Thank you

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