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Water -- Leaves -- Ice
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Nicely done, to twist the phrase around and use it both ways like that. I really liked the narration. You have a delicate touch.
Response from Amita (Author of Water -- Leaves -- Ice)
The phrase did lend itself to a play on words. Thanks.
Wow! I love the way you have written this. And I would never think to do that pairing, but it makes so much sense. Thank you!! =o)
Response from Amita (Author of Water -- Leaves -- Ice)
For the pairing, he does care about another, and he appreciates her talent and ambition. Thanks for the review and the prompt.
That good be a good match. Certainly better than one Astoria Greengrass.
Response from Amita (Author of Water -- Leaves -- Ice)
The two are both similar and complementary.I can't recall Astoria being mentioned except in the Epilogue, and that leaves the reader with a feeling of incompleteness.Thanks for the review.
Lovely, Amita. :)
Response from Amita (Author of Water -- Leaves -- Ice)
Thanks, and glad you enjoyed it.
Wow, that was wonderful. I just loved how you took that prompt and made it your own, deep story.
Response from Amita (Author of Water -- Leaves -- Ice)
This pair seemed a viable match if they could break through their barriers, and the prompt suggested how to describe their doing so. Thanks.
What a beautiful story! I second karelia's sentiment. You did a brilliant job with this prompt!
Response from Amita (Author of Water -- Leaves -- Ice)
Thank you. For some reason, the metaphors leaped out at me.
I love what you've done with this prompt! *applauds*
Response from Amita (Author of Water -- Leaves -- Ice)
Thanks. I wasn't certain about it since it's more sentimental than my usual.
A wonderful use of the promt, thank you.
Response from Amita (Author of Water -- Leaves -- Ice)
Thanks, and you are welcome.
Lovely, poetical prose and intricate development of these two characters slowly gravitating towards each other and a subtle thawing, symbiotic bonding occurring--beautiful and delicate usage of the three word prompts
Response from Amita (Author of Water -- Leaves -- Ice)
Thank you very much. An early story, written in a sentimental mood.