that is how it should have gone.  thanks

If only this had been canon! I like your version a whole lot more. If wishes were horses then beggers would fly. Isnt that how the expression goes?

A pity neither of them was mature enough for this to come out just this way. I never even thought about how Snape could have choked on the soup. It seems the more you look at that chapter in OotP, the worse it gets. Thanks for a thought-provoking vignetee.

I wish you told us about this, I had to find it bt accident!  (shakes finger)I find this a nicer alternative to canon events that could lead to a better understanding.

I prefer your take on this scene! LOL... Great work.

That is more of what I would have expected for a reaction. Thank you for writing this.