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The Brain That Leads Me

1: One-Shot

The Brain That Leads Me

BrenaMarie

13 Reviews   |   13 Ratings, 0 Likes, 6 Favorites )

Romance Drabble/100-Word Alternate Universe Saturday Night Drabbles 1,240 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Severus figures out his stance on flirting with a little help from his cock.

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Chapter 1: One-Shot


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BrenaMarie

Member Since 2006  |  21 Stories  |  Favorited by 48  |  536 Reviews Written  |  360 Review Responses

Hello There! My name is Karen and I live right outside of Philadelphia, Pennsylvania.  Way back in 2006 when we needed to put "Half-Blood Prince" spoilers on our fics... when DH didn't even exist... I created my profile here on The Petulant Poetess.  


Falling in love with the SS/HG Ship changed my life and allowed me to be in a position to save the site from extinction in 2019.  I'm so grateful to be here and to continue to see the wonderful fic here live on for as long as possible.

Author Website
http://brenamarie.livejournal.com/
Also Archived At
Ashwinder, AO3

Reviews for The Brain That Leads Me

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0/10

Karfinwen

this is really good.  i like that this story looks at severus as just another ordinary guy, who attracts and is attracted to women, and who has the same mundane struggles  in a relationship like anyone else.

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of The Brain That Leads Me)

Hey

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of The Brain That Leads Me)

!  Thank you so much for the review.  Sorry it took so long to respond.  I love writing Severus & Hermione dealing with normal couples issues like my husband I deal with.  I'm so glad you enjoyed it.  Much Love ~ Brena

9/10

sevibaby

Poor Severus,  all the ladies want him.

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of The Brain That Leads Me)

Such a tragic life he leads.  :-)

10/10

beaweasley2

LOL if she only knew! littleSev is a perv! I loved the inner dialogue, nicely done. But really, He'd been firting with Sybill? He needs to have his head examined!

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of The Brain That Leads Me)

Sometimes attention is attention, and it doesn't matter if its good or bad.  :-)  Thank you so much for the review!  It seriously makes me so incredibly happy that you liked the inner dialouge!  I was so afraid when I was writing it because I've never done anything smutty before.  Thanks again for reviewing!  Much Love ~ Brena

Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)

Brena, you handled it well. Never, and I mean never, be afraid to stretch your 'box' a bit. You'll only surprise yourself and come up with some great things/idaes/experiences.  I look forward to your next one! bea~

10/10

snitchette

At leas. He knows to not listen to IT unlike some others.

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of The Brain That Leads Me)

Very true

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of The Brain That Leads Me)

, Severus is smart.  Even though his cock apparently didn't inherit his mental capabilities.  At least the situation created much fun for us.  Thanks for the review.  Much Love ~ Brena

10/10

Jinxie

Very amusing poor Severus having all the women after him! 

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of The Brain That Leads Me)

Yeah, he's an attention whore.  This fic was tons of fun for me to write and I'm so glad everyone has been enjoying it.  Thank you so much for the review.  Much Love ~ Brena

0/10

Danu

LMAO Nice one Karen!

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of The Brain That Leads Me)

Thank you so much Honey!

0/10

kimjo2

that was so right on!  well done and thanks muchly

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of The Brain That Leads Me)

Omg,

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of The Brain That Leads Me)

, I'm so glad to hear you thought it was right on!  I was really nervous with this because I didn't think I'd ever be able to pull of anything remotely smutty, and yet here it is!  Thank you so much for the review!  Much Love ~ Brena

0/10

EverMystique

LOL. Interesting challenge, and well-met.

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of The Brain That Leads Me)

Thank you so much for the review

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of The Brain That Leads Me)

!  I'm so glad it made you laugh.  Much Love ~ Brena

10/10

rosered

Do you think you could have your Severus talk to my man?  It would clear up quite a bit of bother for me.  Nicely done!  :D

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of The Brain That Leads Me)

Hey

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of The Brain That Leads Me)

!  If my Severus is going to talk to your man, he needs to have a chat with mine first!  The idea for their argument actually came out of a similar fight my husband and I had about two months ago.  I didn't give him the ulimatem of doom, but part of me really wanted to.  That's whats fun about writing, you can really experiment with stuff!  I'm sorry to hear you're having a similar problem.  Hopefully it all works itself out.  Thanks for the review.  Much Love ~ Brena

10/10

slytherinlaurel

Smut away!  I really had fun reading this.  Mmm...bouncing bums.  :)

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of The Brain That Leads Me)

Hey SlytherinLaurel!  Thank you so much for reading (and reviewing)!  I look forward to seeing you in chat more often!  Thanks again for the support!  Much Love ~ Brena

10/10

Stefdarlin

Tee hee, poor Severus.  I am glad he finally made a decision for Hermione, though. =o)

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of The Brain That Leads Me)

Hey Stef!  Thank you so much for the review and the stars!  I'm glad he made the right decision for Hermione too!  Thanks Again.  Much Love ~ Brena

0/10

Clairvoyant

LMAO.  When I read the character list and saw Rosmerta, I thought that saucy costume had something to do with this.Snape's second brain is a naughty one.  You have good control over him, though, Brenamarie, and it made the right decision.

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of The Brain That Leads Me)

Hey

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of The Brain That Leads Me)

!Thank you so much for the review!  This was my first attempt at anything saucy, I'm so glad it came out good!  I really appreciate your opinion!Much Love~Brena

0/10

sunny33

ROFL  Well done! :)

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of The Brain That Leads Me)

Thanks Sunny!

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