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1: Pressure Point

Pressure Point

slytherinlaurel

6 Reviews   |   6 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )

Humor Smut Drabble/100-Word Saturday Night Drabbles 786 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Draco, Hermione and a lift. Stir until well blended.

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Chapter 1: Pressure Point


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slytherinlaurel

Member Since 2009  |  8 Stories  |  Favorited by 14  |  44 Reviews Written  |  65 Review Responses


HP will always be my original fandom, but these days you'll often find me trundling about in manga/anime fandoms. No OTPs (or OT3s), and gen is always nice.


I’ve hopscotched my way across the States and currently live someplace cold. Very cold. With wind. I keep telling myself it's a character building experience.


Proud parent of an adorable house rabbit and two clingy cats. Mostly a beta, occasionally an author. You can find me at slytherinlaurel.livejournal.com and slytherinlaurel.tumblr.com. Stop by and say hi!


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10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Oh, I like it! :) Ah, the things that happen while stuck in elevators (and apparently after socials... hehe). Good work.

Response from slytherinlaurel (Author of Pressure Point)

So glad you liked it- thanks for the great prompt!

10/10

beaweasley2

AND YOU STOPPED THERE!   RIGHT WHEN IT STARTED TO GET GOOD!  You couldn't just keep going until they got out of that lift? Couldn't you! REallllllY! What a let down....   Just when it was getting good - not that it wasn't good - but Geeeeze! Leave a girl hangin' why don't you!BTW, this was really cute. I especially liked the banter and the innuendos!

Response from slytherinlaurel (Author of Pressure Point)

Thank you!!  I'm glad you liked the dialog (always one of my challenges).  And, well, yes I am a little bit of a tease.  *winks*

0/10

EverMystique

Nothing like pushing all the right buttons, eh? Nice set up. At least we don't see the lift suddenly open, revealing a partially-clothed and well-distracted couple to an unseen audience. LOL. :)

Response from slytherinlaurel (Author of Pressure Point)

Yeah, I don't think anyone would be pleased with an inopportune door opening - either the couple or the unwitting maintenance crew!  ;)  Thanks for reviewing!

0/10

Clairvoyant

Oh, so tormentingly hot. *fans self*  Any plans for continuation?

Response from slytherinlaurel (Author of Pressure Point)

Glad you got some heat off it!  :)  Consider it a warm up for my next few fics.  *smirk*

10/10

debjunk

Mmm, lovely!  Loved the tension in that elevator.  And of course, that kiss.

Response from slytherinlaurel (Author of Pressure Point)

Why thank you!  Glad you enjoyed the tension - I had a lot of fun playing with it.

0/10

sunny33

Hope the lift doesn't get fixed any time soon! :)

Response from slytherinlaurel (Author of Pressure Point)

You and them both...  :)  Thanks for reviewing!

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