New Chapter for Bittersweet
Bittersweet
DarkFate35 Reviews | 35 Ratings, 0 Likes, 32 Favorites )
Stepping into that room was either a blessing or a curse, probably both. Her heart ached with sorrow, yet was filled with joy, until all that was left was the bittersweet longing for the life unlived.
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Member Since 2008 | 10 Stories | Favorited by 12 | 5 Reviews Written | 94 Review Responses
Reviews for Bittersweet
I think I'm going to just have to use an Unforgivable and Imperio you into making this more than one chapter.
I don't push authors to make one-shots into multi-chaptered fics; I know how annoying it can be to get 49387 reviews asking for a longer work.
But, just this one time, I find myself insisting that you do more. Really.
OK... I'm not sure why it's marked completed, but I can assure you that at least from my point of view, this story is NOT complete! It's a very, very good beginning, though :)
That was a great story, but you have to continue this.
Oh, silly writer, this isn't a one-shot! No, no, no! It just begs to be longer.
Either way, very nice ^^
Very good. Definitely not a one shot. Please don't end this here!
I guessed half through it might be Severus' child.
BUT YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT THERE SURELY? Please Please continue this.
Very good. Definitely not a one shot.
Please continue. We need to know more
Nononono. Sorry babe, wrong call. As good as it is, it isn't a one-shot. You need to continue. Trust me on this.
Response from Pyttan (Reviewer)
I like the fact that her moving in time isn't overly explained. I also like that you get to know the child is hers and Severus early. What I don't like is the sad waste not to use this exellent start as multi-chaptered story. I wish I could come up with a stat like this but, Alas ...
Oh dear author! Please don't end this here!!!!
loved the cliffie!