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1: Dear Professor Snape

2: Miss Granger...

3: Dear Professor Snape

4: Miss Granger...

5: Dear Professor Snape

6: Miss Granger...

7: Dear Professor Snape

8: Miss Granger...

9: Interlude: Hermione

10: Interlude: Severus

11: Dear Professor Snape

12: Severus Pays a Visit

13: Interlude: Hermione

14: Severus: Tea

15: Interlude: Hermione

16: Severus: Whirling Edge

17: Hermione: Research and Discovery

18: Severus: Cold

19: Severus and Hermione: The Library

20: Severus and Hermione: Occulto

21: Severus and Hermione: Crimson

22: Severus and Hermione: The Head's Office

23: Severus: Understanding

24: Hermione: Clarity

25: Severus: Fight or Flight

26: Hermione: Truth

27: Severus: Fire

28: Hermione: Love

29: Severus: Release

30: Hermione: Innocence

31: Severus: Poised

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Anastadne

112 Reviews   |   112 Ratings, 0 Likes, 29 Favorites )

Drabble/100-Word Potions Under Duress 5,879 Words 31 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

How what was lost might be found - if she's very, very lucky, and very, very good.

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Chapters (31)

Chapter 1: Dear Professor Snape

Chapter 2: Miss Granger...

Chapter 3: Dear Professor Snape

Chapter 4: Miss Granger...

Chapter 5: Dear Professor Snape

Chapter 6: Miss Granger...

Chapter 7: Dear Professor Snape

Chapter 8: Miss Granger...

Chapter 9: Interlude: Hermione

Chapter 10: Interlude: Severus

Chapter 11: Dear Professor Snape

Chapter 12: Severus Pays a Visit

Chapter 13: Interlude: Hermione

Chapter 14: Severus: Tea

Chapter 15: Interlude: Hermione

Chapter 16: Severus: Whirling Edge

Chapter 17: Hermione: Research and Discovery

Chapter 18: Severus: Cold

Chapter 19: Severus and Hermione: The Library

Chapter 20: Severus and Hermione: Occulto

Chapter 21: Severus and Hermione: Crimson

Chapter 22: Severus and Hermione: The Head's Office

Chapter 23: Severus: Understanding

Chapter 24: Hermione: Clarity

Chapter 25: Severus: Fight or Flight

Chapter 26: Hermione: Truth

Chapter 27: Severus: Fire

Chapter 28: Hermione: Love

Chapter 29: Severus: Release

Chapter 30: Hermione: Innocence

Chapter 31: Severus: Poised


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Anastadne

Member Since 2009  |  4 Stories  |  Favorited by 13  |  0 Reviews Written  |  68 Review Responses

Anastadne is the co-authorname of Anastasia and Ariadne AWS. Hi :)

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10/10

indigo_rose

You're right, there has to be a library scene... it's in the rules.  So now Hermione knows that Dumbledore was involved from the lemon aroma--she just might go up to the Headmaster's office to demand answers (and tea)!The use of it in marriage ceremonies is very intriguing as well.  Keeping secrets kills it.  Love?  Trust?  Fidelity?  Any/all of the above?  Whatwhatwhatwhatwhatwhatwhat?

Response from Anastadne (Author of Hide and Seek)

Glad you liked the marriage ceremony note :)  That probably makes more sense now that more chapters are up!And yes.  Rules.  Library scene.  *consults rules to see if we're forgetting anything*Cheers!~ Ari (for both)

10/10

indigo_rose

"Everything I say is the truth, and everything he says is a lie."  If only it were that easy!  And the word "taint" can mean so many things...Maybe Hermione needs to take tea with Dumbledore!

Response from Anastadne (Author of Hide and Seek)

Mmm, yes, nice catch on that "taint" thing ;)Cheers!~ Us

10/10

indigo_rose

Ooo, the plot thickens...  I wonder what he'll make of that?  And Sev going to Albus' portrait for advice is a nice touch as well; liked how he was uncertain if the wards would recognize him beforehand.


Since Hermione defended him at his trial, I imagine that she deliberately took it and hid it away to insure that public opinion wasn't turned against him.  Not knowing what it was but wanting to protect Severus--very Gryffindor.

Severus needs to hurry it up! 

10/10

indigo_rose

Had to stop for a while to watch The Daily Show (I'm a victim)...  Hmm.  Missing purpose?  And where is Severus?

Response from Anastadne (Author of Hide and Seek)

ooo... we totally understand.I often ask myself where Severus is whilst I'm waiting for Ana to write the next chapter :)  Cheers!~ Ari (for both of us)

10/10

indigo_rose

Severus will obviously have to come in person to retrieve it.  I cannot wait to see the outcome of this.  He knows exactly what Hermione has, but won't tell her.  If I were she, I'd be a bit miffed.  On the other hand, perhaps he's incapable of telling anyone precisely what it is however much he may want to.

Response from Anastadne (Author of Hide and Seek)

*grins*  Won't say much here, but we are loving the way you think!  Thank you so much for reading our story :D~ Ari and Ana

10/10

indigo_rose

Ooo... Were they sharing the same dream/memory?  Was Hermione dreaming it simultaneously as Severus remembered?  It seems to give them a connection.  Can it possibly be his ability to love personified?

10/10

indigo_rose

All I have to say is, I'm glad this is not the last chapter posted at this point!  What a cliffhanger this would be otherwise!  I'll be interested to see if this was just a dream, or a vision of the past regarding... it.

What is it???

Response from Anastadne (Author of Hide and Seek)

*grins*  I think this _is_ actually where we left the story the other night.  The next chapter should clear up your curiosity, at least a little...Cheers!~ Us.

10/10

indigo_rose

This is supposedly what she wanted to do in the first place, but only now he is discussing her returning it?  Obviously he wanted her to have it to begin with, despite what he said to her before.  Or he just wanted her to keep writing letters to him.

Do the two of you have an idea of how this ought to end, or are you both flying by the seat of your pants on this?  If you are, that's not necessarily a bad thing.  So far, I think this is going very well and I'm enjoying it.

Response from Anastadne (Author of Hide and Seek)

'Though this is technically Ana's chapter, she's busy writing so I'll respond here...I'm so glad that you think it's going well.The writing so far has gone like this:Chapters 1-6:  Totally flying by the seat of our pants.Chapter 7, or 8, ish:  Brief discussion to make sure we agree about specific contents of box.Chapters 9-what you've read so far:  Seat of our pants, with a couple of moments to touch base.  I asked Ana to please send me the owl, so she did.  Do we know how it's going to end?  Yes.  That we do.  We know exactly how it's going to end; in the meantime, we're throwing little twists at each other.  We almost never  read the chapters before they post either (there've been two so far, one from each of us, that we exchanged before posting); we see each other's at the same time the readers do.  (Almost.  I beta for both of us.)And we're having a blast.And I love your logic up there.  :DThank you so much!~ Ari

Response from Anastadne (Author of Hide and Seek)

I should clarify:  There were two that we exchanged _after_ this chapter.  At this point in the story, no, we hadn't seen anything prior to posting.  :)Cheers!  ~ Ari

10/10

indigo_rose

You have to burp it?  Please please don't tell me it'll have to have nappies changed too!  Tell us what it is!  Tell tell tell tell....

Response from Anastadne (Author of Hide and Seek)

*grins*  Ana would kill me if I revealed anything here - and rightly so!  :)  But no.  No nappies.  Just.  No.Severus:  Indeed not.~ Ari

10/10

indigo_rose

And just how did he know that she was using the Casaubon book to hold down the lid?  She never mentioned that in her letter to him...  Curiouser and curiouser!

10/10

indigo_rose

So, is the humming due to satisfaction that Hermione is continuing to contact Severus?  I must know what it is!  I'm having thoughts concerning the removal of love from an individual and thereby giving it physical form, but I may be thinking too much for this.Love the tag-team style of writing!  I'll bet this is as much fun for you guys to write as it is for all of us to read. 

Response from Anastadne (Author of Hide and Seek)

*smiles*  We're loving reading your reviews, Indigo_Rose... thank you so much...And we are having an absolute blast with the story, and are so pleased that you're having fun :)Cheers,~ Ari (for both of us; Ana's writing at the moment)

10/10

indigo_rose

Yeah well, if he really didn't care about the trial he wouldn't have said anything at all about it.  Ha!  Go Hermione!

10/10

indigo_rose

What is it?  You will never tell us, will you?  I'm having a lot of fun reading these!

Response from Anastadne (Author of Hide and Seek)

*grins*  We'll tell you... eventually... won't we, Ana?Ana:  Yep.  Both:  *twirls quills*Thanks for taking the time to review!  Cheers ~ Ari and Ana

10/10

indigo_rose

"It likes tea"-- well, that narrows it down to just about any creature residing in the British Isles!  Is this Sev's idea of being helpful?  Flirtatious?  Both? 

10/10

indigo_rose

"Rattling in its case and emitting a strange odour", huh?  Is this supposed to convince him to take it back?  Hee hee...    This is fun, I can't wait to see what "it" is.

Response from Anastadne (Author of Hide and Seek)

So glad you're enjoying the story so far :)  Cheers!  ~ Ari and Ana

9/10

Nessa

Well you've got me thinking. He's not in the 'afterlife' is he? Because I do hope not. I'd like him to have tea with Hermione hehe.

Response from Anastadne (Author of Hide and Seek)

Hee.  Tea.  :D  ~ Ari

Response from Nessa (Reviewer)

I'm sure that's what they call it now a days  

Response from Anastadne (Author of Hide and Seek)

*nods seriously*  Quite.  Tea.  They call it tea.  *makes note to ask site to create a special rating for "tea"*  *laughs*  :D~ Ari

10/10

debjunk

I wondered if it was some sort of Horcrux.  No, really, I did!  But I think you've developed a clever twist on what we know as a Horcrux.  Is she communicating with him in the 'otherworld'"

Response from Anastadne (Author of Hide and Seek)

*smiles*  Bit of a twist on a Horcrux, yes... so glad you're enjoying,

Response from Anastadne (Author of Hide and Seek)

!  *waves*  ~ Ari

10/10

debjunk

You guys are killing me.  Great story!

0/10

debjunk

Uh huh, but which one?

Response from Anastadne (Author of Hide and Seek)

Which one indeed...  Cheers :)  And thanks, as always!  ~ Ari

0/10

debjunk

Argh.  What IS it?

0/10

debjunk

Hurry up, Severus!

Response from Anastadne (Author of Hide and Seek)

Seriously!  I hate waiting for the next chapter as much as you all do!  :)  ~ Ari

0/10

debjunk

Now who is that?  Certainly not Hermione.

10/10

rosered

This is so frustrating!!!  I'm intrigued and annoyed all at the same time.  I love puzzles, especially when I have a hard time figuring them out.  I love it! :D

Response from Anastadne (Author of Hide and Seek)

*grins happily*  *high fives Ana*  We are so happy that you're enjoying the story so far - we're hard at work on the next bits for you...Cheers!  ~ Ari (for both of us; Ana's writing at the moment)

10/10

rosered

This is so crazy.  Hermione stumped?  I love it!  :D

Response from Anastadne (Author of Hide and Seek)

:D  Thanks,

Response from Anastadne (Author of Hide and Seek)

!  We're so pleased you're enjoying the story so far!  ~ Ari and Ana

10/10

debjunk

What? That's it? Geez, poor Hermione blistering away in ignorance.

Response from Anastadne (Author of Hide and Seek)

*smiles*  We can't leave her in ignorance for long.  The blisters, however... *clamps hand over mouth*  *waves*  ~ Ari

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