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Secrets Never Keep
Valady46 Reviews | 7.48/10 (46 Ratings, 0 Likes, 81 Favorites )
Hermione has guarded a secret for four years, and now her secret has been discovered. And she’s married to whom?
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Reviews for Secrets Never Keep
omgosh! Fantastic beginning. Severus sure doesn't mess around when it comes to his family. :D
Response from Valady (Author of Secrets Never Keep)
Thanks... glad you approve! :) I always imagined Sev would be protective of those he loves.
Great start look forward to more.
Bless Severus for taking in a child that is not his, and the father is his enemy. It shows he love's Hermione very much. Will we be hearing about how they got to together?
Response from Valady (Author of Secrets Never Keep)
Thanks. You'll have your answer in the next couple of chapters.
What an intriguing beginning! Judging by your title, it sounds like Lucius does find out at some point... what a shocker to learn he has another child, and how painful for him, as well as Hermione, to forced to relive the memories of what Voldemort forced upon them. And then there's Draco... I can only imagine his reaction should he learn about how he came to have a little half-brother. Definitely sounds like some serious angst is in the offing.
Response from Valady (Author of Secrets Never Keep)
Thank you! I can't tell you too much, it would spoil the story for you. Yes, it's quite angsty. Due to the time constraints (it was written for a fic exchange and I had a deadline) I wasn't able to work Draco into this one.
I like the beginning of this story and i hope you'll continue it
Response from Valady (Author of Secrets Never Keep)
The story is complete, so it's just a matter of getting the chapters posted. Glad you're enjoying it! :)
Interesting start to this story! I hope you continue.
Response from Valady (Author of Secrets Never Keep)
Thank you. The story is finished, and the next chapter will be in the queue soon.
Very interesting start!! I'm looking forward to more!
Response from Valady (Author of Secrets Never Keep)
Glad you like it. Next chapter will be in the queue soon.
This is great. I'm looking forward to the rest.
Response from Valady (Author of Secrets Never Keep)
Thanks! :)
That was a very cute scene there!! Great chapter!
Response from Valady (Author of Secrets Never Keep)
Thank you! :)
Glad the really hard part is over, and that Hermione was able to put it past her. I'm sure she'll heal even more now.
Also, it was nice to see Lucius being humble, and in turn, accepted.
Response from Valady (Author of Secrets Never Keep)
Thank you.
Ah, it will be interesting to see what happens. Hopefully, they can find some closure.
Response from Valady (Author of Secrets Never Keep)
Thanks... not too much more to go then you'll have the answer. :)
Great story, interesting beginning. I love the evolution of the characters.
Response from Valady (Author of Secrets Never Keep)
Thank you. :)
Sneaky way to get around the oath. :)
Response from Valady (Author of Secrets Never Keep)
It worked though. :)
Hermione has the right instincts! :)
Response from Valady (Author of Secrets Never Keep)
Yes, she does! :)
Narcissa wants to make amends, but perhaps the best way is to not stir up old memories! :)
Response from Valady (Author of Secrets Never Keep)
Thanks for the review. Sorry it has taken so long to respond, RL has become hectic.
Very good chapter! I liked it a lot!! Could we maybe get some more information about how the two of them got together? I'm looking forward to seeing more of Lucius's reaction.
Response from Valady (Author of Secrets Never Keep)
Thanks for the review. Sorry it's taken so long, RL has become hectic.
Quite a loophole. Severus should have made her vow as detailed as the one she made him take.
Response from Valady (Author of Secrets Never Keep)
Sev is losing his edge I think. :)
Oh, snap! So much for wizard vows - there's a loophole in everything magical, too.Cat's out of the bag now. omgosh! This isn't good. I hope Lucius can take a few steps back and think a little bit before he makes any decisions on what to do about this. Severus is going to skin Narcissa alive! Great update! :Dp.s.(the explanation of how Severus and Hermione came to be husband and wife was lovely)
Response from Valady (Author of Secrets Never Keep)
THanks. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
I don't know how I missed this update. I must be getting senile!Oh Brother! Narcissa is going to be dogmeat if Severus gets a whiff of what she's trying to pull. The big question is what will Hermione do with the knowledge that they have been discovered. Will she change her routine? or hide away? Great chapter! :D
Response from Valady (Author of Secrets Never Keep)
*iz bad writer* Sorry, RL has been hell. I do appreciate the review, though by now you have the answers to your question.
I wonder how Narcissa is going to pull this off? (And how Snape will handle it.)
Response from Valady (Author of Secrets Never Keep)
Sorry it has taken me so long to respond. We'll see how Severus deals with it soon. :)
Narcissa needs to get over herself and put herself in Hermione's shoes. Here is a woman who was raped and bore a child from said rape. Now someone is trying to get the biological father in the picture. Snape is Alex's father in every sense of the word and he is doing everything in his power to protect his family. Narcissa needs to see this and let sleeping dogs lie. I don't care if Lucius has reformed there are too many bad memories and the Malfoy's will just bring everything to the surface again. Please update soon.
Response from Valady (Author of Secrets Never Keep)
Sorry it's taken me so long to respond... My bad! I'll be submitting the next chapter soon.