The First Time
kittylefish11 Reviews | 8.09/10 (11 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )
Severus and Lily share a special moment. Written for Southern_Witch_69 for her birthday.
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my catalyst into the world of hp fanfic was the ignominious death of severus snape by snakebite in dh. grrrrr. he deserved better, and i set off on a mission to find it! i appreciate and admire the vast and limitless creativity of all of the wonderful writers on this site and in this fandom.
accordingly, for me it's mostly about snape: ss/le, ss/hg, ss/rl are my favorite ships. i especially like happy endings for those who did not get them at the hands of jkr.
Reviews for The First Time
Very sweet, Kitty! :)
Response from kittylefish (Author of The First Time)
thanks, sunny! glad you liked it. :)
Thank you for giving young Severus a sweet moment. He didn't have many of them.
Response from kittylefish (Author of The First Time)
i know, but i like to imagine he had a few, anyway. thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :)
This is lovely and so full of hope.
Response from kittylefish (Author of The First Time)
so glad you thought so. thanks for the pretty shinies. :)
Very sweet and very touching.
Response from kittylefish (Author of The First Time)
i'm so glad you liked it, friend! thanks for the review and the twinklies. :D
I usually don't sail this ship, but this story was so very charming. I loved the details about the jewelry and Lily's desire to prioritize shops and plan an itinerary. Lol, it makes me think of another young witch.Thank you for bringing life to the characters is such a real way. Hugs you!Stef 
Response from kittylefish (Author of The First Time)
thanks so much for this nice review and the pretty shinies. i'm happy you noticed that similarity to that other young witch - i was actually a bit surprised by that myself, but it made me giggle. *hugs*
Oh, this was lovely! So very Severus. Thanks for sharing!
Response from kittylefish (Author of The First Time)
so glad you liked it! thanks for reading and reviewing. :)
That made me cry, thinking about how things ended up. If he's just had more sweet moments like that, it might have been so very different. Look at me, crying over a fictional character! 
Response from kittylefish (Author of The First Time)
heh - i hate to think of how many tears i've shed over severus. buckets every time i've read the prince's tale from dh, and i've read that chapter several times. i can't help trying to give him a little happiness before his sad ending. thanks so much for the review and the stars! :D
Funny - but the same thought went through my head - that he would have been embarrased at having no money in his pocket. It also occured to me that not only might this have been the first time Lily gave him a sweet little kiss, but very well might have been the first time ANYONE had ever done so.....
Response from kittylefish (Author of The First Time)
poor severus. so much to feel sad about there. in my version of events, i think his mum might have given him a few kisses, but i doubt anyone else had. thanks for the review and the pretty twinklies. :D
Oh, this is lovely. I also love Snily. Thank you so much for choosing this route. I'd hoped for something just like this! :) :) xoxoxoxooxox
Response from kittylefish (Author of The First Time)
yay! i'm so happy you like it. i couldn't resist the opportunity offered by your prompt to go to this sweet place. :D
This is a very sweet tale, and made more delightful by your description of wizarding jewelry. Seemingly little touches like that add to the magic and richness of a story. Poor Severus, he probably has no pocket money. And the future doesn't bear thinking about. I am glad you have given him a happy memory.
Response from kittylefish (Author of The First Time)
thank you so much for this lovely review. you've put a big, happy grin on my face. :Dpoor severus, indeed. i like to think about him having had SOME happy times. *sighs*
*smiles* It was so sweet of Lily to kiss him.
Response from kittylefish (Author of The First Time)
so glad you liked it, friend. thanks for all the pretties. :D