This Fleeting World

Aoibheann

2 Reviews | 9.0/10 (2 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

General Psychological Short Story 1,899 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Denae finds more than she bargained for on her journey to safety.

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Chapters (1)

Chapter 1: one shot

About Aoibheann

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Aoibheann

Member Since 2007 | 3 Stories | Favorited by 4 | 52 Reviews Written | 8 Review Responses

I'm a 45 year old Long Island NY woman who works with developmentally disabled adults in a day hab. I have graduate degrees in psychology and theology. I'm also a photographer and a writer. I have been published in "Waxing and Waning" magazine as well as a few other literary magazines throughout my life. I write both fan fic and original short stories.

I'm currently looking for an experienced beta/comma wrangler, as the commas seem to, have, a, life, of, their, own... see? Contact me if you're interested in beta-ing the occasional submission.

Author Website

http://bittersweetme64.livejournal.com/

Also Archived At

Sycophant Hex(under the penname Aoibheann)and AFF.net (under my original penname of celticwitch)

Reviews for This Fleeting World

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9/10

reets67

Thanks for posting this. I enjoyed reading it. While a short story it had a complexity to it at the end which gave it a richness that was satisfying.
Cheers,
Reets

9/10

Melenka

This story was both interesting and highly enjoyable. I could easily see it stretched out, so we could see each of her failed "relationships" as they built toward her end, though it certainly stands on its own. I would have liked to know more about Gareth, especially as he had enough strength (and anger) to traverse the line between life and death long enough to exact his revenge. Then again, I'm a sucker for strong, tortured men. ;)Thank you for sharing this with us!

Response from Aoibheann (Author of This Fleeting World)

I've actually been toying with the idea of a longer piece revolving around the Mage Wars, but "real life" tends to take over a lot, so who knows? Thanks so much for your review.

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