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Misunderstanding

sunny33

24 Reviews | 6.83/10 (24 Ratings, 0 Likes, 10 Favorites )

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Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Severus resorts to desperate measures to get the woman he loves.

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sunny33

Member Since 2008 | 129 Stories | Favorited by 689 | 8,383 Reviews Written | 8,235 Review Responses

Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)

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10/10

Hellsvampireguardian

It must be painful to know he could of had all of her.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Misunderstanding)

Yes. Thanks for reviewing! :)

10/10

Amita

Quite powerful.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Misunderstanding)

Thanks,

Response from sunny33 (Author of Misunderstanding)

. :)

0/10

BrenaMarie

Sunny ~ So I read this last night, and the idea of the situation here keeps popping back into my head. Talk about some serious regret. I can't imagine living with that kind of guilt. What a mess he created. Its insane that after only less than 500 words you wrote something that's been sticking with me for so long. Great Job. Much Love ~ Brena

Response from sunny33 (Author of Misunderstanding)

I'll have to write you something happier this weekend, Brena! :)

Response from BrenaMarie (Reviewer)

Please Do! I'll be on after the race. :-)

8/10

severuslover

Aww...such a bittersweet story! Great job!~Jen

Response from sunny33 (Author of Misunderstanding)

Thanks. :)

0/10

quaffswinegaily

Not like Severus to act without thinking through the consequences. How hard to live with that kind of mistake.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Misunderstanding)

True :)

10/10

snitchette

I wouldn't have thought him to chose the easy way. For someone supposed to be brave... Of course you did it brilliantly but it's still sad.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Misunderstanding)

He was desperate and not thinking clearly. :)

0/10

Maggie

WOW!!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Misunderstanding)

Thanks! :D

10/10

braye27

How very sad. I agree with Debjunk. I think he should brew that counter potion and risk the rejection to have his Hermione back the way she was.I can't believe you wrote a dark fic. Well done!Beth

Response from sunny33 (Author of Misunderstanding)

LOL. I can't believe it either! :)

10/10

rosered

Oh, how sad! Lovely little ficlet, very well written. :D

Response from sunny33 (Author of Misunderstanding)

Thank you! :)

0/10

christev

Aaaaaaaaaaaa! I think I just died a little.........***wonderful storytelling in very few words. well done.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Misunderstanding)

Thanks! :)

0/10

pythia_delphi

So poignant. The tale fit the drabble format so well. Brava!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Misunderstanding)

Thank you. :)

10/10

ApollinaV

Oh agony.agony.Heartbreak.Fantastic writing, you got me between the breastbone. AV

Response from sunny33 (Author of Misunderstanding)

You inspire me, darling! :)

10/10

JTBJAB

Ouch! Poor Severus!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Misunderstanding)

He was a fool, and Hermione paid the price for his foolishness. Thanks for reviewing. :)

10/10

mikimoto

ew!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Misunderstanding)

Exactly! he made a poor choice, and now he is paying the price.:)

10/10

makaem

I'd say poor Severus, but he deserves that one. Not Hermione though.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Misunderstanding)

True! :)

10/10

karelia

What guilt to have to live with! *feels sorry for Sev*

Response from sunny33 (Author of Misunderstanding)

You would think they had never heard of the word communication! :)

10/10

Anonymous

OMG! You did a dark fic! *so proud of you*

Author's Response:

Oo, thanks! :D

10/10

debjunk

Oh, man... that's just harsh! What a horrible thing to have to live with!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Misunderstanding)

Yes. Even if he can find a counterpotion(is that a word?), he would then have to admit his actions and riskj losing her. :)

Response from debjunk (Reviewer)

Can I tell you I went to bed last night and this teeny story was all I could think of! I swear, my head gets wrapped up in the tragedy of things and won't let go. I think if I were him, I'd risk the rejection. He can't be happy with her being only half of herself.

0/10

peppermint

Oh, how sad. If only one of them had spoken up.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Misunderstanding)

true! :)

6/10

chyara

it's interesting.... but i don't "get it"

Response from sunny33 (Author of Misunderstanding)

Snape was in love with Hermione but thought she didn't like him, so he brewed a love potion using a flower from Harry and Ginny's wedding. Ten years later he finds out she was already in love with him ( entry in diary was a day before the wedding). No he regrets it as she is not the woman he fell in love with... hates books.

10/10

lilashannah

Karma!Poor Sev and poor Hermione!!I loved it.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Misunderstanding)

Thanks! :)

0/10

kimjo2

wow! that was a perfect story with the combination given. thanks

Response from sunny33 (Author of Misunderstanding)

Thanks! :)

10/10

mimmom

wow, that's terrible. So tragic. Typical Snape though. Lousy choices, that one.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Misunderstanding)

True! Thanks for reviewing! :)

10/10

FlittterKat

Oh Lord, that made me feel sick with sympathy. What a waste. Well written, it draws the reader into the emotions of the story. Now, I've gotta read something fluffy. :)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Misunderstanding)

Thanks! Hope you found some fluff! :)

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