Lovers

Orpheus Samhain

3 Reviews | 10.0/10 (3 Ratings, 0 Likes, 8 Favorites )

Angst Azkaban Prison 2,297 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Lily (Evans) Potter Severus Snape

The Dark Lord spared Lily. Written for fanfic100's prompt No. 023. Beta: QueenOfSpades - thank you!

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Chapter 1: Lovers

About Orpheus Samhain

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Orpheus Samhain

Member Since 2008 | 8 Stories | Favorited by 2 | 0 Reviews Written | 15 Review Responses

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10/10

snitchette

Using a potion is highly comdemnable. But I can understand why he did it, even if I disagree.

Response from Orpheus Samhain (Author of Lovers)

Yes, it is. I think that Severus here is past the point where he was able to decide what is right and act accordingly.Thank you for your comment!

10/10

morgaine_dulac

Wow, this went from hot to heartbreaking in a heartbeat. I'm speechless! /M

Response from Orpheus Samhain (Author of Lovers)

Thank you for your comment! I have to admit that I was counting on that dissonance between the opening and end :)

10/10

braye27

Oh my! What a powerful and provocative piece! The tension and pacing are perfect. With each new sentence, I found myself drawn further and further into the story, trying to make sense of Severus' strong desire for Lily and his equally strong hesitance to give into her desire for him. OMG! I can't tell you how much I love this... it grabbed my attention immediately and would not let go! I'd give this a hundred stars if the ratings went that high.Very well done! I will have to check out your other stories! Beth

Response from Orpheus Samhain (Author of Lovers)

Thank you very much for your kind words :) It's very rewarding for the author to know that the story worked as intended :)

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