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JTBJAB

69 Reviews   |   69 Ratings, 0 Likes, 53 Favorites )

Drama Romance General Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 7,734 Words 8 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Hermione discovers the main reason why Severus married her...

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Chapters (8)

Chapter 1: Chapter One

Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Chapter 6: Chapter Six

Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

Chapter 8: Chapter Eight


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JTBJAB

Member Since 2006  |  8 Stories  |  Favorited by 22  |  173 Reviews Written  |  208 Review Responses

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0/10

salvamea

to accio a person!!
I think I have never read this one!! glorious.
she can not help going then.
but I am a little disappointed.
She lets her lover or not lover go so quickly, not a word spoken about him, no regret no nothing?
Hermione!

hey, she demands her freedom, and tells him, that she his not his privat property. that is what he needed to be told!YES!
there is something I still don't understand.
so he was supposed to marry her so that she is protected from L.V. but at the same time he tells, the marriage should and could only take place AFTER the war was over.
so what now?
I'm a little bemused.

0/10

salvamea

His speach was wonderful. a brilliant declaration of love.
she nearly must have melted into these soft lips and voice in her neck. BUT
But then his childish behaviour.
grip thight, talking about locking her up, and this pre-teen demand of being the first.
oh no! Severus!!
These two can never get together.
You quite teased us with Max. that was a funny bit!!

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salvamea

isn't she a little to quick in thinking?
can't the wish to be the one to protect another person also mean he wants to protect her because he loves her.
btw protect her from what? are we  before the final battle here? but the genre is given as Epilogue.
enlighten me. what does he protect her from. so he thinks.
and why does she think in that case it can not have to do with love.

10/10

MuseAmusant

*Smirks* Sounds like Hermione's acquired herself a house elf whether she wants one or not. IDK how pleased Severus will be to discover that Hermione now has an elf who is loyal to her first, rather than him...

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debjunk

I love house-elves, except rude ones.

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

:D poor Riply, lol

10/10

pearl city princess

Riply has quite an attitude I think he is a great addition to this story.  Leafer seems sweet and I hope she is what she seems.  There was not nearly enought Severus in this chapter for me, but I still enjoyed this chapter very much.  I hope there will be another chapter very soon.  This is beautiful work.

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

Thank you for such a wonderful review :D Apologies for not replying sooner! Leafer is an old favourite of mine, and when I first thought of Riply I couldn't help but smile :P

10/10

blackaces924

oooooooooh ! Just the thing I love to read ;)

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

;p true true XDThank you for reviewing!

8/10

Maggie

How heartbreaking!

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

Silly Severus not thinking about the words he was using!Thank you for reviewing!

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sunny33

Oh dear, she was sucked in. :)

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

Yup she was!

10/10

Anonymous

After bearing up with Harry and Ron for so long, I would have thought Hermione is far more adept in reading "men" and understanding male language... as well, her reaction doesn't do her intelligence much credit.

Author's Response: Hermione has experience in boys... but not relationships... but yeah, you would think she'd know a little bit more.

Thank you for reviewing!

10/10

snitchette

I'm surprised by her reaction. Of course I don't have the back story, but I really think that the desire to protect her is a strong proof of love... Plus, knowing Snape he is probably not aware that he loves her, which would excuse his approach of things. I hope for their sake that she'll calmed down and analyze things the way she usually do, just to realize the huge mistake she's done. I'm sure he'll forgive her. After all, the make-up is always the best part of an argument. *wink*

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

Making up is definitely the best part of an argument... but they've got a while to go yet!

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pookah

This reminds me of that item on the "list of things men wish women knew':  If I say something that can have two meanings, and one of them makes you angry or sad, I meant the other one.Since most people do not habitually go about insulting others, that us usually true for men or women.  However, Snape has been know to be an habitual insulter in his day...

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

Oh man! That made me laugh!!! And is so true - most of the time - oh, I'm gonna post that on facebook or something... lol!

9/10

gabi1791

That's sad! I'd love to know how we came to be here though!

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

There will be a little more of the backstory given in later chapters.Thank you for reviewing!

10/10

neelix

Oh please tell me this isn't a one shot and that you will update and let me know what's going on... and that he does love her, really... lol!

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

You can smile... its definitely not a one shot :D Lots more chapters to come XDThank you for your review!

8/10

pearl city princess

It's a good first chapter, I can't wait to see how they work things out.

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

Lots more clumsiness of Severus's part I'm afraid, lol.Thank you for reviewing!

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debjunk

Hmm, is that the only reason he married her?  It seems he's really put his foot into it, hasn't he?

Response from JTBJAB (Author of Want)

I guess you will have to read on to find out ;pBut yes... he does seem to have a habit of doing that, lol.

10/10

snitchette

Sev with lose hair and glasse. OMG Don't say things like that or you'll be the death of me.

10/10

neelix

Why is he playing hard to get? I don't understand it! It's on a plate! lol.. looking forward to the next installment.

10/10

makaem

Damn. That's frustrating, nice chapter though!

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