Snapshots

Amita

4 Reviews | 5.0/10 (4 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Drabble/100-Word Saturday Night Drabbles 1,000 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Lucius and Severus must use a non-wizard device after losing a bet to Hermione.

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10/10

nagandsev

Hahaha! Brilliant usage of the Muggle devices, as well as the chronological order of the photographs--little did Hermione know what she would discover! Nothing like Wizard pornography to teach a clever know-it-all something new in more ways than one She'll never be able to look at her mum and friend in the same way, which is a good thing--her Wizarding world and its ways of applying Muggle devices has been expanded--wonderful usage of the prompts!

Response from Amita (Author of Snapshots)

An experimental story - the Devil made me tell it. Thanks, and glad you read it in a tolerant manner.

10/10

ApollinaV

Interesting method of storytelling, I think it enabled you to tell a lot more story in a shorter word count, but in trade you sacrifice the ability to develop the action. I love how things turned out with the reveal of the witches. I'm not sure if Hermione expected her friend or her mother, so those boys are perhaps getting her back. If they were smart they'd have doubleteamed Hermione. Now that's photoworthy. Great job. I enjoyed this. AV

Response from Amita (Author of Snapshots)

Thanks for the sympathetic review. Yes, it was a trade-off and not one I prefer, but I decided to experiment even though it was too much to squeeze into a drabble. Both Hermione and most readers wish the boys had stayed for a sandy-haired-witch.

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sunny33

LOL Amita. I like the lists of photos! :)

Response from Amita (Author of Snapshots)

i bent the prompt. The most Mugglish activity I can think of is watching telly. I almost had them commenting on Star Trek."Why do their wands make that funny noise?""It must be a built-in spell-speaker."

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GeminiScorp

Oh man! Those two are devious. I don't think Hermione thought that was how they would be used!

Response from Amita (Author of Snapshots)

This was definitely Slytherin payback.

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