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Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 Malfoy's Secret
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Malfoy's Secret

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Malfoy's Secret

phoenix

20 Reviews   |   20 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Drama Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 4,675 Words 3 Chapters Complete
Lucius Malfoy

Lucius Malfoy possessed an incredibly powerful Dark artifact. What could possibly have possessed him to part with it?

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Chapters (3)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3


About phoenix

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phoenix

Member Since 2006  |  54 Stories  |  Favorited by 136  |  1,108 Reviews Written  |  1,209 Review Responses

I picked up the Harry Potter fandom around the time the first movie came out and began writing fanfic early 2005 after discovering the adult online community. I identify most closely with the Slytherins and you will see my taste in writing lends me to writing about Slytherins more often than not. In addition to fanfiction, I also make fanvids on the Harry Potter fandom. I'm a Perfect Imagination acredited beta and am willing to help authors. My main 'ship interests are Snape/OC (never really got into the SS/HG pairing) and LM/any female (with HG as a new favorite). I have dabbled in RL/OC and RL/NT and am okay with those pairings. I generally shy away from slash, just not my thing. For updates on my writing, check out my Live Journal

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10/10

sevfank

Awesome job!  Thanks for writing.  Love your stories!

10/10

Shadow

Yip. Definately the consumate Slytherin. Always able to wriggle out a tight spot. I only wonder why it was Snape who informed him of Dumbledore's return?

10/10

Shadow

Wow but that man can be as sneaky as a slithering snake. Good day indeed. Not only does he think he is going to be rewarded for sending the book, but he is getting rid of Dumbledore and found a way to discredit Arthur Weasley too. All in a day's work I suppose.

10/10

Shadow

Interesting to see how these events will unfold from Malfoy's point of view. Funny how he thinks he is going to be rewarded for sending the diary to school. Little does he know...

10/10

Shadow

Interesting to see how these events will unfold from Malfoy's point of view. Funny how he thinks he is going to be rewarded for sending the diary to school. Little does he know...

10/10

Shadow

Interesting to see how these events will unfold from Malfoy's point of view. Funny how he thinks he is going to be rewarded for sending the diary to school. Little does he know...

0/10

debjunk

He's so very full of himself.

0/10

sunny33

Poor Lucius, defeated at every turn! :)

9/10

apisa_b

How cold blooded Lucius Malfoy dismisses the thought of harmed children - as long as they aren't Slytherin ones.
The Death Eater in him is shinigh through in your story.

A good portrait of Lucius Malfoy.

9/10

apisa_b

I really enjoy the background-information to CoSyou give us from Malfoy's POV.
Another well written chapter.

10/10

slasher454

Another insightful chapter :)  Can't wait for the next!

0/10

slasher454

Great story :)  I never really thought about how Tom knew so much about Harry. I guess I always assumed that Ginny told him, but it makes sense that Lucius would have done it and known exactly what he was putting in Ginny's cauldron.  Nice work so far.

0/10

sunny33

Lucius is very sneaky, the consummate Slytherin. :)

10/10

pookah

I thought it was a one shot, (a really good one-shot) but I am enjoying this continuation.  You are doing a brilliant job fitting your version  of Lucius Malfoy's machinations into the already-established book.

10/10

pookah

Brilliant might-have-been!  Cleverly thought-out and well fitted into the tale.

10/10

beaweasley2

I really like the behind the scenes to book CoS that you give us. Lucius is so devious and it's brilliant how yu have him manipulate eveyone.
But he's gonna get in hot water! (I read the book)
 I'm enjoying this, even on a second reading!

0/10

debjunk

You've captured Lucius brilliantly here.

9/10

apisa_b

I always wondered how it was possible that diary!Riddle knew about Harry in CoS. Now I know. The perfect explanation.

0/10

sunny33

Plausible, very plausible! :)

10/10

beaweasley2

Very interesting look at how Ginny got the diary. It's interesting that the book 'called' to him. Hmmm.

Intriguing...

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