Just Dessert
debjunk14 Reviews | 7.07/10 (14 Ratings, 0 Likes, 9 Favorites )
Severus invites Hermione to his room for evening pudding.
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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)
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This was a great fic! I loved how built up the tension and then resolved it. I found the pacing quick and fun and the dialogue well done.
Response from debjunk (Author of Just Dessert)
Thanks so much!
Of course she wants him, how could she not? I love how he finally gave in and that he was angry about it. :)
Response from debjunk (Author of Just Dessert)
LOL, typical Snape, huh? Thanks!
Just perfect. Those prickly personalities could argue forever. Thank goodness they have you, Debjunk, to make them see light and admit their true feelings. Thank you for the lovely story. Hermione + Severus + dessert = YUMMY!
Response from debjunk (Author of Just Dessert)
I have to agree about the yummy part! These two do need a good kick in the pants now and then, don't they?
“Evening pudding in my quarters, Professor Granger!” he spat. [...] “And don’t wear anything complicated!” That reminds me of one of my favourite line of Alan in Robinwood where he said (approximately quoting): "You, my chambers 10:30, You 10:45. Bring a friend. Mmmm that commanding voice of his. *sigh*
Response from debjunk (Author of Just Dessert)
Oh, I remember that! It was so funny! He's just amazing, isn't he? This does kind of mirror that quote, doesn't it? Would love to be commanded like that by him.
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Lovely, lovely, lovely :)
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And what was for dessert? ;)
Response from debjunk (Author of Just Dessert)
I'll leave that for you to decide, oh writer of the food fics.
Wow, well you certainly handled that prompt with gusto! I loved the arguement. He was so - Snapish! Nice job.
Response from debjunk (Author of Just Dessert)
The man is snark personified. Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Nice One :-) Don't wear anything complicated! I love it! I'll have to mention that to AV the next time I talk to her. Much Love ~ Me
Response from debjunk (Author of Just Dessert)
She's awesome with those prompts, isn't she?
Oh, this is great! I think I read it the night you wrote it, but was too tired to review right then. I'm glad I came back and read it through again. What a perfect answer to the prompt, and a great way for Severus (well, actually Hermione) to seal the deal!!
Response from debjunk (Author of Just Dessert)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it... enough to read it again!
delightful, my deb! thanks 
(me blowing kisses)
Response from debjunk (Author of Just Dessert)
Thanks, my kimjo!
At last, the final lemon chiffon after much stirring and a few tart fruits.
Response from debjunk (Author of Just Dessert)
Heh, heh. Definitely worth the wait.
“And don’t wear anything complicated!” I love that line!
Response from debjunk (Author of Just Dessert)
Thank you!
Wonderful! Great job!
Response from debjunk (Author of Just Dessert)
Thank you! I had fun writing it.