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World In My Eyes

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World In My Eyes

BrenaMarie

10 Reviews   |   10 Ratings, 0 Likes, 7 Favorites )

Romance Drabble/100-Word Potter Place Fun 995 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Hermione gets a disturbing piece of mail, but Severus helps her see some good in it.

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Chapter 1: World In My Eyes


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BrenaMarie

Member Since 2006  |  21 Stories  |  Favorited by 48  |  536 Reviews Written  |  360 Review Responses

Hello There! My name is Karen and I live right outside of Philadelphia, Pennsylvania.  Way back in 2006 when we needed to put "Half-Blood Prince" spoilers on our fics... when DH didn't even exist... I created my profile here on The Petulant Poetess.  


Falling in love with the SS/HG Ship changed my life and allowed me to be in a position to save the site from extinction in 2019.  I'm so grateful to be here and to continue to see the wonderful fic here live on for as long as possible.

Author Website
http://brenamarie.livejournal.com/
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Reviews for World In My Eyes

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10/10

droxy

Heee that's a nice turn where H doesnt want to go. =)

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of World In My Eyes)

LOL!  Yeah, It is a switch, isn't it!  Thanks for reading, honey!

10/10

braye27

Now this is absolutely Sensuous!Severus at his best!

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of World In My Eyes)

Braye27 ~ Thank you so much for the review!  He truly is Sensuous!Severus here.  But I think Mr. Gahan's voice lead him in that direction also.  I'm so glad that you enjoyed it.  Thanks again!  Much Love ~ Brena

10/10

MollysSister

And what a sweet bit of closure it will be, that walk in the gardens again 10 years later.

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of World In My Eyes)

Hey

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of World In My Eyes)

!  Thank you so much for reviewing.  I think it will be nice for them to go back there and experience the whole thing again ten years later.  :-)  I'm so glad you enjoyed it.  Much Love ~ Brena

0/10

sunny33

Very good, Brena! :)

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of World In My Eyes)

Hey Sunny!!!  Thank you so much for the review and keeping me company!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  Much Love ~ Brena

10/10

ApollinaV

Excellent, and such a great way of working the song into the fic.  Not at all expected or typical.  How nice.  And they make such a great couple.  Lovely dear, just lovely.  AV

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of World In My Eyes)

Hey Apollina!  Thank you so much for the very lovely review.  I love that you think that this wasn't an expected or typical way of doing things.  It's so awesome that your writing rox my sox and you like mine too!  I can't wait to meet you!!!!!!  Thanks again.  Much Love ~ Brena

10/10

luvsev

Wow!! Really great job! The story is so sweet and sexy, and it was the perfect moment between my favourite couple.

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of World In My Eyes)

Luvsev ~ Thank you so much for the wonderful review!  I'm so glad I was able to do your prompt justice!  I'm also relieved that the sweet & sexy came across.  I never thought I'd be able to pull off anything even mildly sexy without it coming across as cheezy.  Thanks again for the review.  Much Love ~ Brena

8/10

Clairvoyant

I love Depeche Mode.  What a sensuous song for a fic.  Great job with the details.  Keep writing.

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of World In My Eyes)

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of World In My Eyes)

~ Thank you so much for reviewing!  I'm so happy you could see the connection between the song and where I was going with the story.  Dave Gahan truly has an exceptionally sexual voice and I just needed to bring it to my favourite ship.  Thanks Again.  Much Love ~ Brena

0/10

karelia

Lovely!

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of World In My Eyes)

Thank you so much!  I seriously think hanging out with you guys feeds my muse.  Much Love ~ Brena

10/10

snitchette

How sweet. I think Sev could persuade a penguin to buy a freezer with that velvelty voice of his. *sigh*

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of World In My Eyes)

Hey Snitchette ~ I totally agree with you on the freezer bit.  I love that mans voice!  I sometimes wonder where Snape would be if they didn't cast Mr. Rickman to play him... :-)  I'm so glad you enjoyed it.  Much Love ~ Brena

0/10

christev

Ooh, very romantic, very sweet. I'd like the Potions master whispering song lyrics (whispering ANYTHING, really!) in my ear any time! Nice job, Brena!

Response from BrenaMarie (Author of World In My Eyes)

Christev ~ Thank you so much for the review!  This reaction was totally what I was hoping for!  Just the idea of hearing his voice quoting this song...mmmm.  I'm so happy that you enjoyed it.  Much Love ~ Brena

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