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Hey Hazel Eyes Chapter 1: Hey Hazel Eyes
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Hey Hazel Eyes

1: Hey Hazel Eyes

Hey Hazel Eyes

Hey Hazel Eyes

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Devin Aiden Teague

A poem I wrote for my mom, but I suppose most people will see it as, well, overdramatic.

Angst Poetry: Other 159 Words 1 Chapter Complete
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Hey hazel eyes

I see you over there

Hey hazel eyes

Don't pretend that you don't care

Hey hazel eyes

I'm just like you

Hey hazel eyes

I do everything you do

Hey hazel eyes

I'm just your daughter; you don't see

Hey hazel eyes

It's just me; I just want to be free

Hey hazel eyes

Just pretend to know who I am

'Cuz hazel eyes

I know you don't give a damn

Hey hazel eyes

I try to listen

But hazel eyes

When you yell; these tears glisten

Hey hazel eyes

I know you see them on my face

Hey hazel eyes

Don't they seem out of place

Hey hazel eyes

I won't let you order me around

'Cuz hazel eyes

I'll stand my ground

Hey hazel eyes

Do you hear my bitter voice

Hey hazel eyes

It was all your choice

Hey hazel eyes

I'm not your child anymore

Hey hazel eyes

You've lost this war


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2 Reviews  |  10.0/10 Average

10/10

CantSpell

My mother yells too and I know how bad it can hurt and this poem says it all.

Response from Devin Aiden Teague (Author of Hey Hazel Eyes)

thanks for reviewing and all i can hope is that my mom doesn't find this.

Response from CantSpell (Reviewer)

Oh haha!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Beautiful.  I can believe it was almost made for me.  I think I will write this out so my husband can read it to me and I can makebelieve he wrote for me too.  If that is ok?  Sad aren't I?  lol

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