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Hidden Thoughts

9 Reviews | 6.56/10 (9 Ratings, 0 Likes, 7 Favorites )

Drama Romance Drabble/100-Word Alternate Universe GrangerSnape100 333 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Hermione Granger Ronald Weasley Severus Snape

In which Snape catches Hermione and Ron during a patrol... written for the grangersnape100 'Addiction' challenge (3x100).

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imhilien

Member Since 2005 | 26 Stories | Favorited by 53 | 99 Reviews Written | 308 Review Responses

Work in admin by day to support chocolate habit, writes in spare time.

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0/10

debjunk

She definitely said the right thing!

Response from imhilien (Author of Hidden Thoughts)

She did... thanks for reviewing. :)

10/10

MollysSister

OH you tease! I want more! this is brilliant!

Response from imhilien (Author of Hidden Thoughts)

Thanks! I don't have plans for a sequel at the moment, but thanks for asking. :)

10/10

BrenaMarie

Very nice imhilien! Thanks for posting!

Response from imhilien (Author of Hidden Thoughts)

Thanks for reviewing. :)

0/10

sunny33

memo: keep mind closed in Potions class. :)

Response from imhilien (Author of Hidden Thoughts)

Definitely. :) Thanks for reviewing!

9/10

Anonymous

I really enjoy a story where I am left with more questions than answers!

1. Did she know about the Legilimency?

2. Did she know that his route would take her exactly where she was with Ron, thereby stopping anything with Ron before it got started?

3. Is this actually a daydream???

Mm, good one. I liked it a lot.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :)

1. Yes, but accidents happened in the background of this AU story of mine. :)

2. No. I picture Snape on patrol picking a slightly different route every time, all the better to surprise people. :-p

3. No, it's a little what-if story. With a lot of what-ifs. :)

10/10

countrymouse

ahhhhhh-----so nice! (deep sigh of contentment)I love the way you write Hermione and Severus--which brings me to ask, how is progress for our couple and a certain "rose garden" and a ring that (iirc) is still at present inhabiting a box? (nudge"ChoiceofRoads"nudge)I can't wait to read whatever you write next!

Response from imhilien (Author of Hidden Thoughts)

Thanks for that, I'm glad you thought so. :)I've only done a few pages of the next chapter for COR - with my chronic fatigue I'm only really good for drabbles at the moment. :( I will get there, though...

0/10

christev

...daring to reach up and brush strands of black hair away from his face...Very nice! I could get caught up in that scene for quite a while! Thanks for a great story.

Response from imhilien (Author of Hidden Thoughts)

Thanks for that, I'm glad you thought so. :)

10/10

luvsev

Yay, lovely little ficlet. So he was in her mind, hmmm. Perhaps he was tempted.

Response from imhilien (Author of Hidden Thoughts)

Thanks for that. :) He could have been...

10/10

snitchette

It's so good he is a Legillimens. But the good question is: was she aware of it or was she really genuine about her outing with Ron?

Response from imhilien (Author of Hidden Thoughts)

Thanks for reviewing! :) I think at the end of the day she would be happier with Snape (if she had the chance to be with him) in my AU story.

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