New Chapter for Severus' Heart
Severus' Heart
nastygrl16 Reviews | 16 Ratings, 0 Likes, 9 Favorites )
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nastygrl
Member Since 2008 | 10 Stories | Favorited by 77 | 56 Reviews Written | 372 Review Responses
I've been a fan of JK Rowling for a long time, but only turned to fanfiction after DH - read it in one day, cried for three, turned to the internet the day after for more. I favor Severus/ Hermione pairings, especially those with lots of chapters and lovely smut scenes - sex by association, pathetic, isn't it?? I've posted a beta profile, if you'd like to check it out.
In real life I am a single mom living in a small town. Rewarding and boring and the same time. Lucky me ;)
Reviews for Severus' Heart
A lovely picture of Severus.
Very nice indeed.
This is so good. I hope she does get his heart.
Response from nastygrl (Author of Severus' Heart)
I'd like to think at some point she does :)Thanks so much for your review.
That was utterly, fabulously beautiful, I loved it.
Response from nastygrl (Author of Severus' Heart)
Oh, thank you!! I'm so glad you enjoyed :)
Beautiful. I hope this one day is not too far in the future. Else she might break her heart beyond repair.
Response from nastygrl (Author of Severus' Heart)
Oh, I think at some point Hermione will buck up and make her move ;) She values him and sees the true heart of him, I think she'll make him see that, too.As always, thank you so much for the R&R!Dari
Oh, this is beautiful -- almost like poetry."I want his heart, every little beating crease and crevice. I want to feel its weight and breadth, to know how big it really is; not the shriveled one he puts on display for the vultures to feed upon, but the one pulsing with life, the life he could have if he only he would open it to me."::happy sigh::
Response from nastygrl (Author of Severus' Heart)
Thank you so, so much!
Here via Tales rec at 'one_Bad_Man'. This is really lovely, a little snippet to give us a good look at how Hermione see's beneath the surface of Severus. I hope she gets what she wants. Thanks for sharing.
Response from nastygrl (Author of Severus' Heart)
Oh, thank you so very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. And thank you for taking the time to comment; it means the world.
A great choice for the "Picture" prompt and what a lovely job you did with it! Thanks for sharing!
Response from nastygrl (Author of Severus' Heart)
Thank you! I had gone to the community on Lulabelle72's recommendation and Severus' heart was mentioned in passing. I knew immediately what I wanted to write, so I quickly notified the mods and reserved that bit of Severus for my own :)Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave a review, I truly appreciate it!Dari
This lovely as it is, but still could take it further. Lovely.
Response from nastygrl (Author of Severus' Heart)
The LJ commumity Pictureofaman sets the word count for their submission at approx. 600 words. This is 600, exactly :)And believe me, when it comes to Severus, I COULD go further :)Thanks so much for taking the time to read and leave a review, I appreciate both :)
This was truly lovely. Whilst bittersweet, it ends on a note of hope as Hermione clearly has not given up on our dear Potions master opening his heart to her one day. One day, eh?... Thanks for sharing :-)
Response from nastygrl (Author of Severus' Heart)
Thank you! It is bittersweet, isn't it? She loves him and admires him and wants only the best things for him, and that incudes her. One day, in my mind, he does open his eyes and see who is standing in front of him and along side him in his lab :)It is my pleasure to share! Thank you for taking the time to read and review! I apprecite both :)Dari
oh how beautiful and heart wrenching... you culd take this further, even though it's perfect as it is. Thanks for sharing!
Response from nastygrl (Author of Severus' Heart)
Oh, darling, thank you! The LJ Commumity, Pictureofaman, tries to limit to essay to 600 words, or so. Not so easy, when I feel like I could go on and on about Severus :)Thanks for reading and leaving a review, too!Dari
Almost reverent:) and so perfect. The love she feels, and the knowledge she has of him, and the care she would take, are all so beautifully expressed:) Wonderful:)Fizzabella
Response from nastygrl (Author of Severus' Heart)
Thank you! Yes, that is how she feels for him. For all the stories and different ships I've written, Severus just tugs at my heart. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review, I appreciate both :)Dari
Response from fizzabella (Reviewer)
While the story is perfect as is, I would absolutely love to see a sequel come along.Warm regards,Fizza
She knows him quite well. Hopefully, one day, he'll open his heart to her.
Response from nastygrl (Author of Severus' Heart)
It is my hope and prayer, too. Patience and perseverance, I believe, are key :)Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review :)
You've written a beautifully lyrical account of the admiration and love that one very much misunderstood and under appreciated wizard engendered in the heart of one very astute and appreciative witch.I really, really like this picture of a man. Brava!Beth
Response from nastygrl (Author of Severus' Heart)
Thank you so much! I love Severus *dreamy sigh* Have you read the other entries? Gorgeous pieces, all :)Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. Dari