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Effigy

4 Reviews | 7.0/10 (4 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

General Poetry: Free Form 122 Words 1 Chapter WIP

I based this poem on an RP character called Valerian. It really is a mixed genre of mystery, love, lust, power and magic.

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Chapter 1: Effigy

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18, from England Dorset. Poet, writer and RPer.
^.^ studying Media at college.

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0/10

Thank you both :)

I did try to add choppy-ness, but I dunno if it was too much much or not +_+

Darkness. Yes, it is tasty methinks :p

10/10

Dark. Nice. Just how I like it! hehe

8/10

Very nice! I like the flow of it...it's actually a little choppy, which I personally think adds to the sadness. Good job.

10/10

very nice i enjoyed reading it

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