His Water of Life
KellyH17 Reviews | 17 Ratings, 0 Likes, 9 Favorites )
He seeks her once a month. She'll never be able to get away.
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Quite an interesting take! Well done.
Okay, this was different.
I really, I mean REALLY, do not do "Sna-pires" ... but I actually liked this one. You had me curious enough to keep reading. And, I did not find Severus to be unusually cruel. He was trying to satisfy his needs without really harming her.Is this once-a-month offering a typical device in vampirism, or is it original? It's so squickie, but it's there, so why not!
Response from KellyH (Author of His Water of Life)
Someone had asked Stephanie Meyers about that in an interview and her answer was 'gross'. Anne Rice vaguely mentioned about it in a paragraph in one of her novels, but in mainstream publishing that sort of subject is not really brought up.Thanks for your comments XD
wow! freaky! and totally cool! thanks
Response from KellyH (Author of His Water of Life)
Your welcome! My aim was to freak. XD
And we thought he was such a good guy? Very dark and disturbing that he'd abduct her and 'eat' her against her will.
Response from KellyH (Author of His Water of Life)
Yeah, this Snape is not a nice guy. Rarely does he surface in my writings. Thanks for the sparkly stars!
Ewww, Kel! You Dark Woman! :P
Response from KellyH (Author of His Water of Life)
Hee hee! Made you look and grossed you out! XP
Although it was slightly squicky, it was still very good. *claps hands*
Response from KellyH (Author of His Water of Life)
Thanks, Luv! XD
Wow....menstrual blood! Well, THIS IS a different vampire story, good job (kind of gross tho). Good job tho
Response from KellyH (Author of His Water of Life)
LOL I guess you never read Ann Rice before ;)
Well, that was weird 
.... Original idea that suited only being short; anything longer and i think the impact wouldn't have been as great. Great story!
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Response from KellyH (Author of His Water of Life)
Too true on all accounts. Thanks!
Wow interesting!Really liked the ending when it explained exactly "what" he was drinking.It would be an interesting topic for another fic, in which Hermione was willing....
Response from KellyH (Author of His Water of Life)
I think there is a fic out there where she is willing to let him do that. Although I can't remember the name of it atm.
ohh!! Creepy, creepy,creepy!! Thanks for your work - always a great read!
Response from KellyH (Author of His Water of Life)
Thanks! XD
I love it!!! Brilliant. Wish it was a little longer but I suppose it couldn't be otherwise it could get a bit too squick!!
Response from KellyH (Author of His Water of Life)
Yup, it couldn't be longer because it would have got more squicky plus Saturday Night Drabbles have a word limit of 1000. Pooey.
Brr That's creepy. I think I'll need a cheering up potion after that. But I'm not sure I'll trust our dear Professor this time.
Response from KellyH (Author of His Water of Life)
Obliviate! Points to Sunny33 fics for some cheering up.
OUuuu dark and disturbing and I do mean that as a compliment! woot!
Response from KellyH (Author of His Water of Life)
Thanks! XD I would never take dark and disturbing as in insult. XD
Anonymous
gah
who was your beta???
Clever.
Gross.
but Clever.
Author's Response: I had you in mind the whole time as the beta. Mahahaha. Plus, I think, Pen's head would've expose after reading this. ;)
BTW - In order to remember to spell your name right I have a saying, which is, Robbie Does a HOLy MAN in TeXas. Never fails.
And Thanks XD *puffs out chest for someone thinking I'm clever*
Creepy and a bit gross. Nice little shot o psychological horror, and an interesting idea. Cool.
Response from KellyH (Author of His Water of Life)
Thanks! XD Yup, creepy and gross, that is what I was aiming for.
*cough* I get it now...