First Love II
Chapter 6 of 6
CantSpellSev is in love with a special girl so he takes dancing lessons and writes.
ReviewedHey you!
Do you remember me?
I used to sit next to you at school.
We indulged in all the extra-curricular activities.
We weren't particularly cool.
Monday Charms,
Tuesday Transfiguration,
Dancing on a Friday night.
I got Chess Club on Wednesday,
Archery on Thursday,
Dancing on a Friday night.
Hey you!
Could you ever fall for me
The way I fell for you?
And do you dwell upon the thoughts that I occupy
Or do you give yourself things to do?
Monday History,
Tuesday Quidditch,
Dancing on a Friday night.
I got Runes on Wednesday,
Astronomy on Thursday,
Dancing on a Friday night.
With you, with you.
Monday, Tuesday,
Wednesday, Thursday,
Dancing on a Friday night.
Let the music smother me.
Whole weekend recovery.
Dancing on a Friday night.
See the lady I adore,
Dancing on the dancing floor.
Dancing on a Friday night.
Gods, the way she moves me
To write bad poetry.
Dancing on a Friday night.
With you.
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11 Reviews | 9.0/10 Average
Awww, he is so proud of himself.
You pushed his buttons, and found the one marked Crucio.
Severus had a lot to put up with.
Poor Severus, to want something so much, and then when he finally gets it, his mother suffers.
Very dark, for one so young.
Oh ain't love grand.
I like the confidence in himself, and I can nearly see his smug expression as he finally gets the spell right! hehe
Response from CantSpell (Author of Torment Poems)
Yes, this is obviously before he begins to be made fun of. I think we he starts to get "tormented" I believe his self confidence will take a dive, poor fellow
No, I did. I got the letter the day before I had to leave, haha
LOL.. I hope that's him giving the speaker a Crucio. ~snicker~ Poor guy. No wonder he's so pissy, eh?
Response from CantSpell (Author of Torment Poems)
I think any kinda of gossip would make us all jsut a little cazy or in this case, very angry. Yeah, it's Snape. I enjoyed the pudding part, that one made me lauph when I wrote it. That too was based on a personal expirence!
Response from CantSpell (Author of Torment Poems)
By the way, I enjoy your stories very much. Yours are the best I’ve ever read, you hold true to character’s personalities. I think some of us forget what the characters are like in the books and we make the mistake of forming some kind of quixotic Snape that’s quit scary.
southern_witch_69's response:Thanks. It's easier in some stories than others. I guess it depends if I'm feeling Snapey. hehehe! I am quite happy that you read my work though.
Poor Snape! I can just feel his disappointment. Grrr, his dad's a jerk!
Response from CantSpell (Author of Torment Poems)
This one is based on when I tried out for a band playing my tuba and they were to resond to tell me if I had made it in two weeks time and...sadly, the letter never came. I was so upset, then I had found out that it jsut got lost in the mail and I was accepted. But I think a Hogwarts letter would have disturbed me more.
southern_witch_69's response: Oh, man! So did you not get the chance later on to play?I think this is adorable. I like all the little names they call him (poor bloke). It reminds me of something Peeves would come up with.
Response from CantSpell (Author of Torment Poems)
This is my first try so thank you! yes, I'm really interested in Snape's childhood and I'll prolly do more stuff like this.
Response from CantSpell (Author of Torment Poems)
Now that I think about it...you're right, it does sound like peeves would say...haha weird..southern_witch_69's response: Teehee! Cool. I can't wait to read.