The Audacity of One Little Hufflepuff
sara lady dalian10 Reviews | 7.0/10 (10 Ratings, 0 Likes, 5 Favorites )
The dungeons were not a safe place for a small Hufflepuff to be alone this late in the day.
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Reviews for The Audacity of One Little Hufflepuff
Loved it. Thank you.
Oh, what a sweet and brave little Hufflepuff. It is cute how she presented her case and tehn won him over. I liked that he was willing to listen to her and then accepted the challenge to teach her how to play. I really enjoyed this story.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of The Audacity of One Little Hufflepuff)
And I really enjoyed your review! Thank you.
I don't normally read OC stories, but I'm very glad I did. A lovely, simple, truthful story, I hope you'll keep writing!
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of The Audacity of One Little Hufflepuff)
Thank you so much for your words - I'm glad you exited your comfort zone a little. I hope you continue to like her story as it unfolds.
Very nice little story.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of The Audacity of One Little Hufflepuff)
Thank you.
I liked this! I liked that a student from another house gave Severus the compliment of asking to learn from the best. I am pretty sure that deep down Severus aknowlegde the compliment:-))
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of The Audacity of One Little Hufflepuff)
She is full of surprises - and remember, she was raised with Slytherins, though she is Hufflepuff through and through. She always gives acknowledgement where it is due.
Oh, I can smell a much bigger story here. You have dropped too many unanswered details. Why are her brothers so much older? What else does she approach Snape on? Why does he remember her elder brothers as not well regarded? And so much more.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of The Audacity of One Little Hufflepuff)
The story is much bigger - there is so much to tell about her. I hope I can do the story in my head justice. Thank you for reading.
Having read sunny's and livvy's reviews, I can only concur! This is a marvelous story, and is ripe for more telling! Having written only one one-shot myself, I'm certainly no one to urge you to continue writing and sharing your talent, but in the interest of the purely selfish interest I have, I WOULD LOVE TO READ YOUR FURTHER DEVELOPMENT OF THIS SERIES!I'm adding you to my favorite authors list so that if and when you do post more I will know about it!Beth
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of The Audacity of One Little Hufflepuff)
*claps hands... Thank You! I'll let you know about the other stories. Audacity is very special to me as it was one of the very first fanfiction stories I ever wrote. *salutes the kind words.
I read Sunny's review and all I can say, is DO IT. Show us your style, how you see the series as a whole. I will read it. I was intrigued by the story and you can only grow as a writer by putting yourself out there. You may be surprised. More power to you! Excellent start!Livvy
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of The Audacity of One Little Hufflepuff)
The stories carry our little Hufflepuff through her years at Hogwarts, and a few years beyond. They are AU as of DH, but I guess I could post them. I've always liked this series. I'll have to hunt down a different beta - Nathaniel is too busy currently to take any more work right now. *hummss... going off to think....
Very nice. Now, about the other story? :)
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of The Audacity of One Little Hufflepuff)
There are several others on the plot board, but they are not in any order. I wonder, would it be better to post what I have, or wait until they are written in order? What do you think?
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
If they are related , I guess we should be patient and wait for them in order. :)
I really enjoyed this little story. I very much want to read everything you have on Severus Snape and Miss Stouffards.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of The Audacity of One Little Hufflepuff)
This is part of a larger story that will be told in small segments. Other parts of her story are out at beta, though I am unsure of when I will get them back. Once I get an entire segment back and reworked, I will start to post the segments. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Sara