New Chapter for The Problem with Purity
The Problem with Purity
phoenix writing47 Reviews | 5.26/10 (47 Ratings, 0 Likes, 100 Favorites )
As Hermione, Harry, and Ron are about to begin their seventh and final year at Hogwarts, they learn some surprising and dangerous information regarding what it means to be Pure in the wizarding world. HG/SS (with HP/DM). AU after OotP.
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Member Since 2009 | 3 Stories | Favorited by 15 | 46 Reviews Written | 43 Review Responses
I'm an avid writer and reader of Harry Potter fanfiction with a tendency to write absurdly long fic (though that doesn't all get posted). HG/SS and HP/DM are my OTPs, though I've been known to dabble in a Snarry now and again.
Reviews for The Problem with Purity
Anonymous
Great chapter... might go sneak over to ashwinder and read the rest there.
Anonymous
Have I ever told you how much I love a well-put-together Hermione?
Anonymous
This story is so original and creative. Ok, so I was sill to start with Chapter 53. :P
Anonymous
Andrew reminds me of Hermes from Futurama. After being cajoled by my friends, I started reading this on Ash, but started in chapter 53 (Yeah, I know, that's kind of silly). Anyway, I thought I would read it properly here. And review. :P
I was going through my old bookmarks, and I wanted to drop you a good review. I am so interested in where you are going with this fic. I do hope that you are planning on continuing this, as I ahve no idea how long it has been since the last update. RL has had me away for awhile! This fic is promising, and I'm loving the Hermione/Harry friendship.
I found this on Ashwinder, it was recommended by a friend. I've really enjoyed it and I hope you continue to post on here as well because I love this site (it seems to be so much more user friendly).
I have a trip coming up and I am thoroughly disappointed because I leave/come back on days that you update so I am going to have to wait until I get where I am going for the updates, a major bummer let me tell you.
The writing is excellent, the story unique, and I think I've become a H/D fan which I never thought would happen. :)
wonderful update and quite brilliant how they're warding their roos. thanks
I hope they come up with some clues soon!
Nice coverage of the background of their courses and Prefect's duties etc. Helps as one reads on later. :)
I am glad to see you are still posting on this archive. I thought during the draught that I would need to go over to Ashwinder and read there. Which is not a huge problem, I just like the reader friendly features of this site better. Glad you are back with us.
Wow, what a fabulous chapter! I absolutely love the detail in which you go into the various spells that Hermione crafts for their defense and safety, and on how she manages to convince Professor Snape to allow the boys into Potions. The scene where Harry has to literally pry her off of Severus because she's so happy was priceless!
This is such an involved story, and you've obviously thought out things to a large degree. It's great to read, and I've officially added it to my "Favorites" here. Keep up the brilliant work, and I look forward to more!
Nice story and great chapter! Only, what makes you believe that muggle teenagers are so different from wizard ones? Maybe not to the extent of everyone loosing their virginity by seventeen, but not so much that Hermione should be that surprised. I guess that depends on the geography.
Hah! I wondered if it was the both of them. At least they're living together and can protect their secret together.
I think Hermione's dealing with her parents the way you've written it is far superior to what she did in canon. It was very typical of her to take matters into her own hands and simply Obliviate them. I've often wondered what their reactions were when she restored their memories. This works much better, with them making the choices themselves. A much more adult decision from Hermione.
Now for these mystery love interests... can't wait to find out just who they are.
Hey there! It's me again your friendly neighbourhood fan-girl. Just dropping another note to say I Love this story. It's my brand of Heroin (Twilight Reference). You've got such awesome and unique things going on and it totally rox my sox! Much Love ~ Brena
what a deliciously detailed chapter. wonderful update to an intriguing story. thanks so much
I am tickled at how quickly Harry caught on as Hermione began to create their cover story! Clever! I hope Harry’s crush is Draco.
Siruis was a brilliant choice to help Hermione hide her parents. I can certainly see how any other known Order member would feel compelled to tell Dumbledore. Tell me the Grangers have more magical help available to them beside just Crooks?
Whoo - Hoo! again an excellent chapter - your attention to detail is grand - thanks for all the extra work you put in - good plot sustain with HG and HP dialoge - loving that they are confessing crushes - and nice continuation with mature decisions that are still believable in teenagers. Thanks so much for your writing - can't wait to see the next post!
Nice rooms! And locking Albus out - three cheers for Herms! :)
Oh, thank God. They didn't sleep together! Cool dorms too.
I've just read your whole story at ffn and I have to say that your story is one of the best I've ever read. Hope you'll also finish posting it here. Thank you for sharing.
Nice digs. Loved Harry's reaction, as it mirrored my own lol. Fawkes' presence intrigues me...
Curiouser and curiouser...I feel myself getting sucked into the mystery...and of course must show this by abusing ellipses... ... ... lol
Whoa, WTF Scrimgeour? This promises to be interesting...
These have got to be the coolest rooms ever. I figured it would wind up being Harry and Hermione as the two virgins! And they wasted no time whatsoever getting their cover story straight with each other--smart move! I'm also enjoying Hermione's bond with Fawkes and wondering when we'll find out the reason behind that. Fawkes is usually just window-dressing if he's mentioned at all in most stories, so it's good to see him getting a little more time in the limelight.
Aw, poor Stebbins! I hope he'll reappear later to revenge himself on Scrimgeour for that Obliviate! The clerks of the world (whether Magical or Muggle) deserve respect!
Intriguing beginning for what sounds to be a great story--I'm off to the second chapter to see for myself...