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Soul Food

karelia

25 Reviews | 6.64/10 (25 Ratings, 0 Likes, 4 Favorites )

Romance Snapshot Drabble/100-Word Epilogue What Epilogue? Saturday Night Drabbles 797 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Lucius learns over the course of a few years that mushrooms can be a lot more than just fungi.

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Member Since 2005 | 83 Stories | Favorited by 232 | 666 Reviews Written | 2,343 Review Responses

Dabbling in writing, in music, enjoying knitting on reasonably cool days. Petulant admin. Beta for some. Alpha for some. Cheese-maker for many. Locavore with a passion.

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10/10

phoenix

That is a very nice and sweet story. I like how it's Luna who is his rock for several years after Narcissa passed away. Very well done.

Response from karelia (Author of Soul Food)

I just love me some LuLu every now and then, LOL. It's a highly underrated pairing.Thanks for reviewing!

9/10

belle4life

awww this is so cute. i love the imagery of the forest and the two of them slowly building a hesitant freidnship.Thank you for reccing it to me. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

Response from karelia (Author of Soul Food)

Thank you! So glad you enjoyed! xD

9/10

sara lady dalian

Interesting. Luna is one that could pull this off if anyone could. Imagine sharing wild mushrooms with Lucius. *hum....

Response from karelia (Author of Soul Food)

I would llllllurve to share wild mushrooms with Lucius. As long as I get to pick them. :PThanks for reviewing!

10/10

Mazzy

Lovely. I thought it was especially 'Lucius-like' for him to notice her hair was "just like his" rather than just like Narcissa's specifically. :)

Response from karelia (Author of Soul Food)

Thank you! Yeah, I have no doubt Lucius has a vain streak. LOL :D

10/10

KellyH

Three word prompts are so much fun to play with and I love what you did with it. So heart-lifting and pleasing. XD

Response from karelia (Author of Soul Food)

Thanks, Kelly! So glad you like it! :D *pats the shinies*

10/10

Dreamy_Dragon

It was so sad to see Lucius's grief, and I'm glad Luna could make life better for him. There's also a very nice rhythm to the story.

Response from karelia (Author of Soul Food)

Thank you, Dreamy! :DI don't know where it came from, but when Lyn came up with the prompt, the story kind of wrote itself. All with Lucius's approval, of course. ;)

10/10

Anonymous

What a strange and lovely way of findinig solace! Well done!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Thank you for letting me know and for the stars! :D

0/10

salvamea

yes. thank you Luna.That she would be the one what makes life simpler.Fantastic.And the rhythm is so soothing, annual meeting, voluntary, unvoluntary. who decides it any longer. all he has to decide is to take the hand. and he does.

Response from karelia (Author of Soul Food)

Thank you.

0/10

morgaine_dulac

Oh, how adorable!

Response from karelia (Author of Soul Food)

:D Thanks, Morgaine!

10/10

lyn_f

Mmmm, mushrooms!This was *wonderful*, and I loved your answer to my prompt! Your Luna was so much in character, and poor Lucius, pining after Narcissa like that.Well done, LITC! :)

Response from karelia (Author of Soul Food)

Heh, mushroom and cheese are my staple diet, LOL!Thank you for your kind words and the stars. I'm glad you like it!

0/10

WriterMerrin

Aww. It's so much in character for both of them. The sweetness takes over the sadness, and the hope (very much Luna) wins out!

Response from karelia (Author of Soul Food)

*smiles* Thank you, Merrin!

0/10

mom7knox

really nice job - love the mushrooms!

Response from karelia (Author of Soul Food)

Thank you!

10/10

snitchette

I've never thought of this particular couple as a plausible one. Now that you've done it, I'd say why not. And the title you chose is just perfect.

Response from karelia (Author of Soul Food)

Merci beaucoup, Snitchette! It surely isn't a popular pairing, but really, it isn't any less likely than Hermione/Severus. :D

8/10

PDamian

This was a wonderfully sweet story. It's hard to keep a fanfic from devolving into spun sugar, or worse, cheese, particularly in the H/C genre, but you've struck just the right note. I loved this. Thanks for writing!

Response from karelia (Author of Soul Food)

Heh, I hear ya on the cheese! LOLThanks for reviewing!

10/10

Stefdarlin

Aww, poor Lucius. So much love for Narcissa. I am so happy he found a friend in Luna. Maybe more.

Response from karelia (Author of Soul Food)

It broke my heart, seeing him in such despair. I, too, am happy he found Luna. :DThanks for reviewing and the stars!

0/10

debjunk

Aw, sad, yet hopeful all in one. Loved the slow progression. You could tell he didn't want to forget Narcissa.

Response from karelia (Author of Soul Food)

Thanks, Deb! I think Lucius is making me write the occasional sad drabble in order to ensure my WIPs are truly happy, LOL. :D

0/10

rhiannon113

Extremely odd pairing, I love it!! =] And such a random thing to bond over, well done.

Response from karelia (Author of Soul Food)

Yes, an odd one indeed. No odder than Severus and Hermione, really, but yeah... :DThanks for reviewing!

10/10

Prof M McGonagall

Well written! And a very interesting use for mushrooms. I have a hard time seeing Lucius and Luna together, but you made it work for this ficlet.

Response from karelia (Author of Soul Food)

Thank you, Professor! The mushrooms kind of wrote themselves into the piece. :D *pats the shiny stars*

10/10

sunny33

Cute, LITC, cute. But I still don't like mushrooms, even with Lucius on the side. :P

Response from karelia (Author of Soul Food)

*grins* Thanks, love! You can have the steak, I'll have the 'shrooms. ;)

0/10

banshee_of_scotland

I love the pairing, but I find it awesome that Luna found love over 'shrooms. Erm . . . I'm a bit strange.

Response from karelia (Author of Soul Food)

Teehee, do I detect a fellow 'shroom fan here? :DThanks for reviewing!

10/10

Gardengirl

Nice! Great job I think Luna is quite underutilized in fanfiction - she's so versatile.

Response from karelia (Author of Soul Food)

Thank you, GG! I agree. I myself keep forgetting how much I like canon Luna. :D

10/10

luvsev

Beautiful. Luna could end up being his new chance at happiness. =)

Response from karelia (Author of Soul Food)

Thanks, luv, glad you enjoyed! :D

0/10

apisa_b

How much you managed to transport with this drabble-series. So many emotions, so much hope ...I really, really like your Luna.That three little words triggered this ... astounding!

Response from karelia (Author of Soul Food)

Wow. Thank you for your kind and encouraging words! The moment I saw the three words Lyn threw into the chatroom, it started to write itself. :D

10/10

MollysSister

Holy jumped up jupiter I dont think I have ever read this pairing before much less considered it. Hats off to you my dear. Way to think outside the box.

Response from karelia (Author of Soul Food)

Heh, I don't think I've ever been inside the box. :DLucius decides what to write, and I write it *shrugs*. Not much I want to do about it.Thank you for your luvverly review! *pats the shiny stars*

10/10

oohdear

this is so good, i love it, the simplicity and the level of emotions, well done indeed.

Response from karelia (Author of Soul Food)

You flatter me :DThanks, love!

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