Bubbles
Stefdarlin13 Reviews | 5.92/10 (13 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
Filius gets a shove in the right direction.
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Stefdarlin
Member Since 2007 | 33 Stories | Favorited by 35 | 263 Reviews Written | 407 Review Responses
I am a 37 year old wife and mother and began reading fanfiction in the middle of last year. Soon it revived my desire to write, which had lain dormant for a number of years, and I couldn't be happier. I do hope you enjoy my stories as I empty my head of them.
Thanks to MMADfan I proudly ship AD/MM, and thanks to OSUSprinks I proudly ship FF/PS. I am also rather fond of SS/OC and am beginning to appreciate the SS/HG ship thanks to Subversa.
Happy Reading and writing!!
Cheers!!
Stef 
Reviews for Bubbles
Filius slapped his forehead, his face beet-red now. “Great Merlin, what is wrong with me? I cannot believe I said that.”
“How long have you wanted to say that?” Without thinking, Filius answered, “Three years—Peeves! Get out of here this instant!” After chasing the poltergeist from the room he couldn’t turn back to face Pomona.
Whut? Peeves? (that's the only bit that confused me, or didn't seem to fit - where is Peeves, or better asked, what is he doing?)
But other than my confusion, no doubt due to my ineptness, I loved this!
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Bubbles)
Peeves, being the poltergeist his is was floating through. He has the habit of looking for mischief wherever he can find it. And having been in the castle as long as he has, of course he would have seen how the professors felt about each other . I have always felt Peeves is smarter than some characters give him credit for. Besides, Order of the Phoenix is my favorite book. You must admit he rises to the occasion in that book by far. =o)
Response from Fishy (Reviewer)
Hrm ... but he isn't mentioned at all other than Filius speaking to him - if I were you (which I'm not so feel free to toss my unrequested advice right out the kitchen window) I would mention Filius saw Peeves at least once before he scolds him - I think it would be much clearer. Generally, when you have character dialogue, you need to introduce them to your readers, or you may have some confusion - such as me! 
Did I mention how much I love this? 
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Bubbles)
Lol! Yes you did mention that. Thank you for your review. Sorry to have confused you. I am so glad you love it. Filius and Pomona are rather dear to me. =o)
Haha! I was looking for something short and sweet to read, and this was perfect. Where is her bubble bath, BTW? And was she lying in wait for him? heehee!I'm glad that three years of longing have finally been taken care of!Thanks for the cuteness.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Bubbles)
*Giggle* So glad this satisfied your need. =o) I picture the bath near her chambers, sort of like the prefects bath but for teachers? Truthfully, you know Pomona. There isn't a devious bone in her body. She just really needed a soak, sigh.To get the full effect, let me suggest reading it while listening to 'Let's Get It On' by Marvin Gaye. That song was sort of the inspiration for it, LOL. *Snrk*Thank you so much for reading and reviewing... and the pretties. (CFR) *tee hee*
How darling!
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Bubbles)
Aw, thank you. I am glad you think so. & thanks for the sparklies, too. =o)
Ahhh! I'm glad those poor professors get some action. Nothing like de-stressing in a bath. XD
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Bubbles)
Oh yes!! The professors definitely get action. What do you think Obliviate spells are good for?? LOL!Thanks so much for your review. =o)
LOL! So glad that he finally had the right situation to speak his mind. Adorable.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Bubbles)
Giggle, yes, I find Filius does better with a little luck on his side. And the Adorability factor is why I love this pairing.Thank you so much for your review, dear.
Very cute!
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Bubbles)
Thanks, I'm glad you think so. And thank you for your review. =o)
Great job with the prompt, dear. I love how Filius just sort of spoke his mind almost absently. =)
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Bubbles)
LOL, he was suffering from libido overload, the poor man. Thanks for thinking up the prompt for me. 
And thank you for your review and the sparklies. =o)
Response from luvsev (Reviewer)
You are definately welcome, dear. I remembered having heard you say at some point that you shipped FF/PS. I thought that you may as well write about something you like, so why not.
About time, Filius, you silly man you! That was fun; short, sweet and right to the point.CFP Dianne
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Bubbles)
And the only thing that was running through his head as he watched? Let's Get It On by Marvin Gay, lol.
Thanks for the review and the sparklies, Di. CFR.
And it's all Peeves' fault! ;)
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Bubbles)
Somehow, I don't think Filius minds much, lol.
Thank you, Peeves! :)
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Bubbles)
Tee hee. Sometimes, even poltergeists are helpful. =o)
Very nicely done. I love the resigned way he acted after he knew he'd been busted. LOL!
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Bubbles)
Yes, I know. Poor Filius thought he had no chance at all with her. Worse, he thought she would be angry. But Pomona has too soft a heart for him, but he didn't know that at the time. =o)Thank you sooooo much for your review... and my present. You have me bouncy now. Tee hee.
*smile* Very sweet.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Bubbles)
Aw, thank you. I'm very glad you think so.And thank you for the review and the sparklies. =o)