Paper Clip in my Pocket
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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)
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"loosen up" ... ehm, I'm seeing a different effect here *whistles innocently*/M
Response from debjunk (Author of Paper Clip in my Pocket)
Well, you know, double entendre lives. He might just use that Portkey after all.
*coughs*stiffennotloosen*cough*XDLovely!!!
Response from debjunk (Author of Paper Clip in my Pocket)
LOL. Took me a while, but that gave me quite the chuckle. Severus is too much of a gentleman to bring attention to THAT!
Hermione and her magic fingers were just what the doctor ordered, and Patient!Severus responded beautifully. I'll bet they don't even stay for dinner... other, more important "duties" are waiting to be taken care of.Wonderful!Beth
Response from debjunk (Author of Paper Clip in my Pocket)
Thanks, Beth! Glad you liked it. I'm sure they won't stay. He does have a Portkey after all.
beautiful! and satisfying. thanks so much, my deb. 
(me blowing kisses)
Response from debjunk (Author of Paper Clip in my Pocket)
Thanks, kimjo! Glad you liked it.
Oooh, I loved that Severus decided to loosen up.
Response from debjunk (Author of Paper Clip in my Pocket)
He really deserves to sit back and enjoy himself, right?
"Maybe, instead, he should turn around and grab that woman who’d just kissed him, pull her into his lap, and show her just how much he could ‘loosen up’."Definitely the better choice! Great drabble! :)
Response from debjunk (Author of Paper Clip in my Pocket)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Oh wow! What a great response to the prompt, I'm so happy! And this was full of such great gems. A meddling Molly, a seductive Professor Granger, and his disappointment that nobody was there to watch him billow! Too cute. What a great one-shot. AV
Response from debjunk (Author of Paper Clip in my Pocket)
Oh, Apollina, I'm so glad you liked it! I sat and thought of so many reasons why he'd make Portkeys, and I finally fell in love with this reason. I love a billowing Snape. (and a seductive Granger.)
Oh wow! This was hot! Go Hermione! She did loosen him up quite a bit! Lovely ficlet!
Response from debjunk (Author of Paper Clip in my Pocket)
Thanks! Hermione's a determined one, isn't she?
Make him relax, indeed! And here I thought Albus was always the one making portkeys, lol. Very nice.
Response from debjunk (Author of Paper Clip in my Pocket)
He really needed that, didn't he? Snape learned everything he knows about Portkey making from Albus. Tee-hee.
nice - thanks for the smile!!
Response from debjunk (Author of Paper Clip in my Pocket)
Thanks! I aim to make people smile. 
How about if he touched the portkey and took Hermione with him? Hehe.
Response from debjunk (Author of Paper Clip in my Pocket)
Hmm, that probably came later!
Awww, lovely! But oh, that manipulative Molly! No wonder Severus felt the need for an emergency Portkey!Nicely done, deb! :)
Response from debjunk (Author of Paper Clip in my Pocket)
Thanks, Lyn! Molly really doesn't know when to leave well enough alone. Aren't we glad?
Who needs Portkeys when you have a Granger? :)
Response from debjunk (Author of Paper Clip in my Pocket)
LOL, that's so true!
Of course Hermione can make him relax. =)
Response from debjunk (Author of Paper Clip in my Pocket)
If she can't do it, no one can!
*grinning madly* My job is getting extremely boring. Fortunately, I have the lot of you to cheer me up. And I'm most grateful for it.
Response from debjunk (Author of Paper Clip in my Pocket)
So glad to be at your service! Thanks!
I enjoyed seeing Severus being cared for by Hermione in such a loving manner.
Response from debjunk (Author of Paper Clip in my Pocket)
Hermione knows a good thing when she sees it.