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Summer Storm

sunny33

21 Reviews | 5.14/10 (21 Ratings, 0 Likes, 3 Favorites )

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Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Hermione and Severus have let their sex-life become boring over the years. But one day...

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sunny33

Member Since 2008 | 129 Stories | Favorited by 689 | 8,383 Reviews Written | 8,235 Review Responses

Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)

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10/10

sevibaby

A older body can never do or look like a younger one. To bad. This was cute. I loved the imagery of the garden.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)

Yep. We all get past that sort of thing. :)

10/10

Hellsvampireguardian

Well at least they added some excitement back into their sexlife!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)

They tried! :)

10/10

Anonymous

I can't believe I didn't review this before, given how much I... liked... the story.

Your use of imagery, descriptions and... the word "redlolent," filled me with joy, as the realism and beauty involved helped clear a bowel obstruction that's been lurking for some time.

Well done.

Author's Response: And you STILL can't spell redolent. I need to work on you more.

10/10

Anonymous

Beautiful, and so true! Great response to the challenge, too.

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

0/10

mom7knox

how beautiful! Wonderful imagery - love your descriptive touch - deft and perfect!

Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)

Thanks! :)

10/10

MollysSister

I want someone to draw some fan art of Snape cavorting naked. Wouldnt that be grand! Thank you for a beautiful mental picture nonetheless.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)

He probably won't stay outside long enough to pose! :)

0/10

quaffswinegaily

the thought of a geriatric Snape out in the scud gives me the heebee jeebies. Tuck the old man up in bed before he catches his death of cold

Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)

He will need a doc. Know any good ones? :P

Response from quaffswinegaily (Reviewer)

all the good ones are taken!

0/10

kimjo2

lovely and sooo true at that certain age. thanks so much

Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)

We get soft as we get older!)

10/10

luvsev

Beautiful scene of them out in the rain.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)

Thanks! :)

10/10

braye27

It is the thought that counts, and as I know the "pleasures" of creaking joints and aching limbs first hand, I think their chosen solution to the chilling rain showed utter dedication to the ... err... project at hand!Well done, sunny!Beth

Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)

Thanks, Beth! :)

10/10

irishredlass

Oh I can feel their pain! On to the companion.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)

LOL :)

10/10

snitchette

Getting cold with a few little rain drops. They're disapointing me because I'm sure a bit of foolish wand waving would have solved the problem.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)

Yes, but wouldn't that defeat the purpose of it all? :)

0/10

Prof M McGonagall

The chattering teeth made me giggle. Nothing like a warm, dry, comfortable bed...

Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)

So true! :)

0/10

debjunk

Heh, heh, at least they tried to relive their youth! Cute and realistic.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)

Give 'em points for trying! :)

0/10

WriterMerrin

Oh, that is utter cuteness. Yes, the dry, warm bed is better after all.

Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)

Absolutely! :)

8/10

Sevvy

Loved this! (I'm looking towards the heavens as I write in the hope of a 'spring' storm myself - not likely actually as it's a lovely, relatively warm, sunny day here!) The realism in this brought a real smile to me today however - thank you! :-)

Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)

Thanks,

Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)

! :)

10/10

apisa_b

LOL - so realistic! Loved it.But have they forgotten they are witch and wizard in their passion? Hello warming charm?

Response from sunny33 (Author of Summer Storm)

That's cheating! :P

0/10

snapesphoenix

well, it was fun while it lasted - and now they can have a little fun getting warm again. hehe